Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Miracles - Chap 25"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Julie Helms
This is a sweet chapter between Tango and Danni. I wonder, even though she's a ghost and not girlfriend material, if there's somehow a future love story there.
Marshal
(Not capitalized when not part of a name. Just like officers wouldn't be.
Tango chuckled. "Sounds about right. And DeLuca? You're not gonna believe this
(There's a gremlin at the end of this sentence)
Excited to see the wrap-up!
Julie
:-)
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a sweet chapter between Tango and Danni. I wonder, even though she's a ghost and not girlfriend material, if there's somehow a future love story there.
Marshal
(Not capitalized when not part of a name. Just like officers wouldn't be.
Tango chuckled. "Sounds about right. And DeLuca? You're not gonna believe this
(There's a gremlin at the end of this sentence)
Excited to see the wrap-up!
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Hurrah! I think I made it through.... And I appreciate your time, thoughts and support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol you are doing an amazing job. The contest called for 10000 words, a novella, but you are writing an entire book and an exciting one. I'm still catching up. Big hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol you are doing an amazing job. The contest called for 10000 words, a novella, but you are writing an entire book and an exciting one. I'm still catching up. Big hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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The other contests for book of the month had been 30,000 so I wasn't aware that it was 10,000 until I had already started this story. But I did it! I think it is my best book yet. Hope you love the ending.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Rossi should end up as his boss's roommate; would suit them both (not in a good way). Danni looks too real for Tango, he's developing a crush. How sweet of Danni to take Miriam to see Rebecca and the new baby and mama. This has been a great story, maybe the best, although I have enjoyed every one of them. I am hoping for another chapter, although the story seems to be at and end. You have done an amazing job, especially while visiting with family.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Rossi should end up as his boss's roommate; would suit them both (not in a good way). Danni looks too real for Tango, he's developing a crush. How sweet of Danni to take Miriam to see Rebecca and the new baby and mama. This has been a great story, maybe the best, although I have enjoyed every one of them. I am hoping for another chapter, although the story seems to be at and end. You have done an amazing job, especially while visiting with family.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You've got five more chapters to go! And each of them will be surprising and full of emotions. I post number five tomorrow...it's written but I decided to give people a chance to catch up before giving them the ending. Happy reading, Carol and thanks so much for enjoying this novel.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
This chapter had gave up some release from the intensity of the last story. Tango seems interested in having an affair with a ghost. Miriam is conserned about her granddaughter. I wouldn't thing she would be old. Wasn't she murdered on her wedding day?
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This chapter had gave up some release from the intensity of the last story. Tango seems interested in having an affair with a ghost. Miriam is conserned about her granddaughter. I wouldn't thing she would be old. Wasn't she murdered on her wedding day?
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Awwww. Now I'm feeling all the feelings! This is a perfect balance after all the crime/capture action of the previous chapter.
Miriam is the perfect touch to bring us all back to love, the baby, the power of the "spirit."
You're pretty well there, Carol!
I knew you'd make it!
I hope you enjoyed Thanksgiving without typing away the day!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Awwww. Now I'm feeling all the feelings! This is a perfect balance after all the crime/capture action of the previous chapter.
Miriam is the perfect touch to bring us all back to love, the baby, the power of the "spirit."
You're pretty well there, Carol!
I knew you'd make it!
I hope you enjoyed Thanksgiving without typing away the day!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Thanksgiving was enjoyable and I only worked first thing in the morning and then late last night before calling it quits. I was determined to have the post with Doyle completed for today. It took longer than I expected but I hope I got it right.
Smiles, Carol
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Well don't ask me. Apparently I've forgotten how to read comprehensively. (In my defense, your honor, I was WAY overtired from yesterday!)
(blushing)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I'm glad DeLuca came back onto the right side of the badge he wears. I loved the scene in the old house with Tango and Danni and the interaction between Danni and Miriam. Beautifully done, Carol, and I enjoyed catching up on some chapters.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I'm glad DeLuca came back onto the right side of the badge he wears. I loved the scene in the old house with Tango and Danni and the interaction between Danni and Miriam. Beautifully done, Carol, and I enjoyed catching up on some chapters.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A fine chapter, and things are coming together very well. Hope there'll be no more complications - and that Donatelli gets better and their baby survives. Action packed as always.
Well done. I admire how imaginative and prolific you are.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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A fine chapter, and things are coming together very well. Hope there'll be no more complications - and that Donatelli gets better and their baby survives. Action packed as always.
Well done. I admire how imaginative and prolific you are.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
Another excellent chapter, Carol, you always know how to keep the tension and suspense ticking up a notch and that's what I love about your writing. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Another excellent chapter, Carol, you always know how to keep the tension and suspense ticking up a notch and that's what I love about your writing. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have done a remarkable job tying up loose ends. Garth had to wait until a second novel before catching William, but he was able to get both William and Vince Rossi. The only things left are the lovey-dovey, warm and cozy, living happily ever after connections. This has been a wild ride, and I've enjoyed every word.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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You have done a remarkable job tying up loose ends. Garth had to wait until a second novel before catching William, but he was able to get both William and Vince Rossi. The only things left are the lovey-dovey, warm and cozy, living happily ever after connections. This has been a wild ride, and I've enjoyed every word.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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There are a few not-so-lovey-dovey surprises too! But I love that you are always in my corner. I've got rough drafts written, and it looks like I've got four chapters left if I did things right... It has to be done by Saturday! Crunch time...oh wait, it's supposed to be Turkey time. Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
This was a very nice episode With Miriam being on her way to meeting her granddaughter, and a connection, they say that ghosts have a reason why they haven't 'crossed over' and I guess this is Miriam's, and of course there's a granddaughter of Eleanor, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This was a very nice episode With Miriam being on her way to meeting her granddaughter, and a connection, they say that ghosts have a reason why they haven't 'crossed over' and I guess this is Miriam's, and of course there's a granddaughter of Eleanor, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol