His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Their vehicle being marked isn't too surprising. There are always people who find something about others to dislike and try to make them uncomfortable.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Their vehicle being marked isn't too surprising. There are always people who find something about others to dislike and try to make them uncomfortable.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a bit of a tease, Jacob, making us wait to find out why Jacob's been crying:) You paint an excellent scene of the seagulls and the appearance of the mini-bus and its passengers to young locals who are far from respectful of the centre's reputation. Another great read, Jacob. Take care Debbie
Once the engine('s) died
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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This is a bit of a tease, Jacob, making us wait to find out why Jacob's been crying:) You paint an excellent scene of the seagulls and the appearance of the mini-bus and its passengers to young locals who are far from respectful of the centre's reputation. Another great read, Jacob. Take care Debbie
Once the engine('s) died
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
Another fine chapter of your book. It keeps getting more mysterious the deeper we go. I would like to know what Mary is doing Callum. Are they trying to brainwash him? I wonder.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Jacob,
Another fine chapter of your book. It keeps getting more mysterious the deeper we go. I would like to know what Mary is doing Callum. Are they trying to brainwash him? I wonder.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Jacob,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
Hmmm...what did Mary do with Abraham? And how are they going to deal with these people who keep taunting the? Lots of questions and no answers just yet. Maybe Danielle will get some from Callum but I'm doubting it. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Hmmm...what did Mary do with Abraham? And how are they going to deal with these people who keep taunting the? Lots of questions and no answers just yet. Maybe Danielle will get some from Callum but I'm doubting it. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
I can't imagine why Callum would be crying and I'm anxious to find out. Also, I'd like to know what Mary and Abraham talked about. There is a group of people here in town that run a restaurant. They all live in a commune together and they are bussed in and out every day. They dress kind of weird but restaurant is nice and very popular. I enjoyed reading you post. I'm glad you did two today.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I can't imagine why Callum would be crying and I'm anxious to find out. Also, I'd like to know what Mary and Abraham talked about. There is a group of people here in town that run a restaurant. They all live in a commune together and they are bussed in and out every day. They dress kind of weird but restaurant is nice and very popular. I enjoyed reading you post. I'm glad you did two today.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is getting tense. I can feel it as I read. You did an excellent job writing this. I can't wait to read more.
Abraham's lumbering towards us, tears streaming down her face. (his face???)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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This is getting tense. I can feel it as I read. You did an excellent job writing this. I can't wait to read more.
Abraham's lumbering towards us, tears streaming down her face. (his face???)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, and for the six stars. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.