Emotional Dawn
When confidence lost is found . . .29 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice picture. These little ones are tough to do. You did well. I hope you have a good week, and also a very happy Thanksgiving. We are having ham this year. Karen
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Nice picture. These little ones are tough to do. You did well. I hope you have a good week, and also a very happy Thanksgiving. We are having ham this year. Karen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, my lady! ;-) These shorties can be a bit of a challenge which makes them so fun!! ;) Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette
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You are so right. I love the challenge. It is like the variety puzzles. Karen
Comment from royowen
What a very good poem Lady Yvette, you always were a star in scribal economy, saying a lot in only a few words, it makes one even better in the longer ones, beautifully written my articulate friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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What a very good poem Lady Yvette, you always were a star in scribal economy, saying a lot in only a few words, it makes one even better in the longer ones, beautifully written my articulate friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for stopping in on this one, Roy!! :-) And I do apologize for my delayed response.... my son is home for a few days until he goes to his dad's and I've been spending as much time as possible (when not at work) with him!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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Bless you Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have the perfect picture to go with your lovely 5-7-5 poem, Yvette. It's such a calming poem, the word and the bird flying over the desert really make me feel warm and relaxed. Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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You have the perfect picture to go with your lovely 5-7-5 poem, Yvette. It's such a calming poem, the word and the bird flying over the desert really make me feel warm and relaxed. Well done, my friend, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for stopping in on this one, Lady Sandra! And I do apologize for my delayed response.... my son is home for a few days until he goes to his dad's and I've been spending as much time as possible (when not at work) with him!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Effervescent offers two kinds of hope - full of enthusiasm for the future, and just plain bubble and giddy.
I listen to a dayspring rhapsody each morning when I have coffee on my back porch and listen as the critters and the breeze and the nearby ocean sing morn's song:-)
A lovely poem for this contest, and I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Effervescent offers two kinds of hope - full of enthusiasm for the future, and just plain bubble and giddy.
I listen to a dayspring rhapsody each morning when I have coffee on my back porch and listen as the critters and the breeze and the nearby ocean sing morn's song:-)
A lovely poem for this contest, and I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, my lady! ;-) These shorties can be a bit of a challenge which makes them so fun!! ;) Be sure to stop by the front porch again some time and take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Nicki.B
Very powerful message within and I think we all at some stage or another in our lives may have felt this loss of confidence and the triumphant feeling on getting that back is amazing. Your choice of words are excellent to convey this. Well done and good luck
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Very powerful message within and I think we all at some stage or another in our lives may have felt this loss of confidence and the triumphant feeling on getting that back is amazing. Your choice of words are excellent to convey this. Well done and good luck
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, my lady! ;-) Always good to hear from you here -- Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Tim Margetts
What glorious use of words to capture a moment.
The joy of a true wordsmith is to use uncommon words to illustrate a common theme.
Thank you for sharing this vision of dawn.
Tim x
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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What glorious use of words to capture a moment.
The joy of a true wordsmith is to use uncommon words to illustrate a common theme.
Thank you for sharing this vision of dawn.
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, Sir Tim -- this is me blushing at your compliment! ;-) These shorties can be a bit of a challenge which makes them so fun!! ;) Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Wow!! Thanx so much for those wonderful stars there, Lady Jasmine!! ;) You made my day!! ;) I apologize for my delayed response.... my youngest son is home for a few days until he goes to his dad's and I've been spending as much time as possible (when not at work) with him!! ;) Thank you again for the starshine and take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rene Tyo
What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, sir! ;-) These shorties can be a bit of a challenge which makes them so fun!! ;) Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for your review on this one, my lady! ;-) Always good to hear from you here -- Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thanx much for stopping in on this one, Lady Sal, and I apologize for my delayed response.... my son is home for a few days until he goes to his dad's and I've been spending as much time as possible (when not at work) with him!! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette