2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
What an incredible journey Butterflies are tasked with in their short lives. I loved everything about this Gypsy. So much said in so few words. Quite relatable.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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What an incredible journey Butterflies are tasked with in their short lives. I loved everything about this Gypsy. So much said in so few words. Quite relatable.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Always a pleasure, my friend.
Comment from shelley kaye
is the leaf talking to the butterfly?
(that's how i'm reading it - but it could be just me lol)
a cool imaginative and expressive gogyohka with a dreamy feel
smooth flow and nice golden colours...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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is the leaf talking to the butterfly?
(that's how i'm reading it - but it could be just me lol)
a cool imaginative and expressive gogyohka with a dreamy feel
smooth flow and nice golden colours...
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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No, it's the poet talking to the butterfly. I didn't find a literal Pic.
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
It such a beautiful and meaningful thing when we let others hitch a ride that ultimately brings us and them to somewhere or something positive. We all, need a ride in life ant times. Nice illustrative language, and beautiful presentation once more.
RJ
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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It such a beautiful and meaningful thing when we let others hitch a ride that ultimately brings us and them to somewhere or something positive. We all, need a ride in life ant times. Nice illustrative language, and beautiful presentation once more.
RJ
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Bill Schott
This gogyohka, Hurry Up, has the proper formatting and instills the need for urgency as the world of the butterfly is endless in its realm but finite in its length.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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This gogyohka, Hurry Up, has the proper formatting and instills the need for urgency as the world of the butterfly is endless in its realm but finite in its length.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
The butterfly can give us happiness so maybe that's why the narrator invites the butterfly to ride on his/her back up the mountain. Life is like climbing mountains, sometimes!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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The butterfly can give us happiness so maybe that's why the narrator invites the butterfly to ride on his/her back up the mountain. Life is like climbing mountains, sometimes!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival ❤️
Comment from Wendy G
That is a very interesting poem! I see it as urgent care for the vulnerable, combined with a desire for purposeful living, and overcoming obstacles in one's path to move from a valley to a place of vision. I might be totally wrong!
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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That is a very interesting poem! I see it as urgent care for the vulnerable, combined with a desire for purposeful living, and overcoming obstacles in one's path to move from a valley to a place of vision. I might be totally wrong!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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You are not wrong.
Thank you very much for your excellent review 😊
Gypsy