His Silence
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Comment from Begin Again
Oh heavens, now she's losing Callum too. She's going to feel all alone and who knows what will happen. I'm going to try and catch up before I get too far behind.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Oh heavens, now she's losing Callum too. She's going to feel all alone and who knows what will happen. I'm going to try and catch up before I get too far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Life at the house seems to be going quite well for Callum. Danielle is not happy about that. Callum seems to trust everyone at the house and she doesn't really trust anyone. Could her brother have meant to possibly risk her life?
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Life at the house seems to be going quite well for Callum. Danielle is not happy about that. Callum seems to trust everyone at the house and she doesn't really trust anyone. Could her brother have meant to possibly risk her life?
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
I was afraid that Callum might be the one to hooked into this place and not willing to leave. Danielle seems to be the one more suspicious and wanting to find out what happened in the past but pretty she idn't going to want to remain here.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I was afraid that Callum might be the one to hooked into this place and not willing to leave. Danielle seems to be the one more suspicious and wanting to find out what happened in the past but pretty she idn't going to want to remain here.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Callum is getting brainwashed too. Danielle is going to have to do this by herself. That's really scary. I am starting to really worry now.
'What do you mean?' he says, sitting next to me. (sitting beside me)
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Callum is getting brainwashed too. Danielle is going to have to do this by herself. That's really scary. I am starting to really worry now.
'What do you mean?' he says, sitting next to me. (sitting beside me)
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I always thought Callum was in danger of becoming indoctrinated! And those working on him are ensuring that they achieve this. Poor Danielle (I'm not going to stop calling her by her proper name:)) She needs a friend right now. Well done with this excellent chapter, Jacob. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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I always thought Callum was in danger of becoming indoctrinated! And those working on him are ensuring that they achieve this. Poor Danielle (I'm not going to stop calling her by her proper name:)) She needs a friend right now. Well done with this excellent chapter, Jacob. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
Another great chapter. You keep your reader engaged through out the chapter. As usual you leave your reader wanting more.
This sentence doesn't make sense:
Perhaps he just fancied going( to) a walk somewhere.-My suggestion is: Perhaps he just fancied going (for) a walk somewhere,
Glad to see you back. I was just thinking about you the other day. Hope all is well.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Jacob,
Another great chapter. You keep your reader engaged through out the chapter. As usual you leave your reader wanting more.
This sentence doesn't make sense:
Perhaps he just fancied going( to) a walk somewhere.-My suggestion is: Perhaps he just fancied going (for) a walk somewhere,
Glad to see you back. I was just thinking about you the other day. Hope all is well.
Cecilia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2024
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Thank you Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome
Cecilia