Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Miracles - Chap 5"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a nice resolution for this part of the story. :
Jenna thanked her and soon found herself walking with Eleanor at the local art gallery. They wandered through the quiet, dimly lit halls, admiring the works displayed along the walls. For a moment, the worries of the past few days faded. This answers a few questions: When she convinced herself that it was safe to return to work, Jenna noticed a small, discreet box on her desk -- a pregnancy test. Attached was a note from Rebecca -- "I'm running out for a few things. As your friend, I am concerned. Toss the test or use it. I won't mention it again. Just take care of yourself."
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This is a nice resolution for this part of the story. :
Jenna thanked her and soon found herself walking with Eleanor at the local art gallery. They wandered through the quiet, dimly lit halls, admiring the works displayed along the walls. For a moment, the worries of the past few days faded. This answers a few questions: When she convinced herself that it was safe to return to work, Jenna noticed a small, discreet box on her desk -- a pregnancy test. Attached was a note from Rebecca -- "I'm running out for a few things. As your friend, I am concerned. Toss the test or use it. I won't mention it again. Just take care of yourself."
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I'm glad I am on the catchup so I can go straight on to the next chapter. Rape would be a hard thing for anyone to cope with but hiding it w is making it worse for Jenna. Great chapter Carol
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I'm glad I am on the catchup so I can go straight on to the next chapter. Rape would be a hard thing for anyone to cope with but hiding it w is making it worse for Jenna. Great chapter Carol
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 09-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Oh, Valda....thank you so much. I am so far behind on answering the reviews due to circumstances I can't see to control, but I do want you do know how appreciative I am. Your kindness means a lot to me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I seem to be getting further and further behind. I don't seem to remember the rape. I'm going to have to go back further. This can't be good. Your writing is spot on though. I'll have to do better.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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I seem to be getting further and further behind. I don't seem to remember the rape. I'm going to have to go back further. This can't be good. Your writing is spot on though. I'll have to do better.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, you never let up. From one conflict to another, who will Carol pick on next. I love the short breaks between posts, a benefit to me. But for you, it means you seldom get the rewards your great writing deserves.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Wow, you never let up. From one conflict to another, who will Carol pick on next. I love the short breaks between posts, a benefit to me. But for you, it means you seldom get the rewards your great writing deserves.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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Forgive me for being so far behind in telling you how much I appreciate your time and support in my writing. Life has handed me another one of those "circumstances I didn't expect" and I am falling behind. Nothing new, right? Just know that your thoughts on my writing mean a lot to me. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Forgive my cut and paste... I promise to do better!
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Never worry about the little things, my dear. I'm with you regardless!
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Just what I needed to hear. Thank you!
Comment from Julie Helms
Poor Jenna is not having a good day. Good development of interactions between the characters. Little mysteries peeking around the corner to entice us. I'm looking forward to finding out the deal with the painting that Eleanor wasn't quite being forthright about.
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Poor Jenna is not having a good day. Good development of interactions between the characters. Little mysteries peeking around the corner to entice us. I'm looking forward to finding out the deal with the painting that Eleanor wasn't quite being forthright about.
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024
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Doyle has his fingers on the pulse of finding revenge and it's going to come at them from every side. the painting, Jenna, Donatelli and who knows what else. Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Well, so she is pregnant, I'm absolutely sure. But now what? At the moment she feels totally abandoned and I'm afraid rightfully so. That is the cynical me speaking. It would be nice to be proved wrong. We'll see. Ulla xxx.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Well, so she is pregnant, I'm absolutely sure. But now what? At the moment she feels totally abandoned and I'm afraid rightfully so. That is the cynical me speaking. It would be nice to be proved wrong. We'll see. Ulla xxx.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Yes, at the moment Jenna is confused and desperate... I hope things get better and she makes the right decisions for herself and the child. Thanks so much, Ulla.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
UH-OH. This is just what I was worried about previously. Clever you leaving us with this life-altering cliffhanger! Rebecca is very intuitive. Maybe. Or she's sly and shifty -- I still don't know how I feel about her.
Donatelli needs a swift kick in his, er, ego. (If you don't mind my saying so)--
SO much more to say, but I'm way behind and must push forward! Great writing thus far!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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UH-OH. This is just what I was worried about previously. Clever you leaving us with this life-altering cliffhanger! Rebecca is very intuitive. Maybe. Or she's sly and shifty -- I still don't know how I feel about her.
Donatelli needs a swift kick in his, er, ego. (If you don't mind my saying so)--
SO much more to say, but I'm way behind and must push forward! Great writing thus far!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Yeah! Donatelli is about to find himself in big trouble.... And the story starts ot shift into high gear. Hope you enjoy!
Smiles, Carol
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Oh! A juicy tidbit to gnaw on! Donatelli's going to be in trouble. I can't wait!
Comment from Wendy G
She's pregnant - but to the rapist presumably .... Not good. Matthew won't understand - and what a mood he was already in! Eleanor would not have made a mistake about the painting.
Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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She's pregnant - but to the rapist presumably .... Not good. Matthew won't understand - and what a mood he was already in! Eleanor would not have made a mistake about the painting.
Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Matthew's about to have an avalanche of emotions fall on him and he's going to have to struggle through it. Hopefully, with the help of his friends, he'll find his way back home. Thanks for the review, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, this is frustrating. I guess Jenna was raped? The nightmare seems to say so. I hate it when characters keep secrets and the long delay in telling someone causes more harm to relationships with everyone. That's why I gave up on Kdrama - so many of the good characters kept information from the very people who could help them. Okay, I'm done venting!
secret life of CJ Grey?" (You have "Gray" later so you might want to keep it consistent)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Oh, this is frustrating. I guess Jenna was raped? The nightmare seems to say so. I hate it when characters keep secrets and the long delay in telling someone causes more harm to relationships with everyone. That's why I gave up on Kdrama - so many of the good characters kept information from the very people who could help them. Okay, I'm done venting!
secret life of CJ Grey?" (You have "Gray" later so you might want to keep it consistent)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Yes, then name shouldn't change on a whim or the slip of my fingers. LOL Fixed and I thank you. Jenna well learn quickly the error in her ways and hopefully her friends and Eleanor will help her. Thanks so much, Helen.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Poor Jenna. She's so sick, and then to have Matthew give her the cold shoulder on top of it must have really hurt her. Rebecca is certainly a good friend to her, and she needs one now. Good writing, and a good chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Poor Jenna. She's so sick, and then to have Matthew give her the cold shoulder on top of it must have really hurt her. Rebecca is certainly a good friend to her, and she needs one now. Good writing, and a good chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I think Rebecca and Jenna will bond together with both of them struggling with things from the past. thanks for the review. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol