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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Callum still seems to be her friend and not all that enamored of Eve, but Oliver is determined to force her to care for him. The exercises he has her do almost seem to be hypnotic suggestion as she pictures things she doesn't want to see.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Wow, talk about not respecting boundaries. This guy is over the top, and what's with the hypnosis stuff he's doing, or whatever it is? This is really a fascinating book, and keeps you on the edge of your seat.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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The creepiness continues with Oliver becoming more and more sinister and suspicious and Danielle in trouble if she can't break free from his clutches. I wondered about the term 'memory relapse.' Should it be flashback? But your intriguing story keeps me hooked. Well done, Jacob! Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Debbie. I'll have to double check that. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Danielle is in real danger here. I am so worried about her. Oliver is dangerous and wants her to be his wife, if there is such a thing here. He was probably trying to do the same thing with her mom and that's why they left. I believe he also had them killed as he did Noah.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Jacob,

You have produced another stellar chapter to your book. You have me curious now as to what Oliver is up to with Grace. The imagination runs wild with all the possibilities. Keep writing I need to see what happens next.

Great job as usual. Love this story line.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Cecilla, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 01-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. Your story never disappoints.

    Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
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Oliver thought he had her, but Danielle still had the ability to fight back against his control. How long can she hold out? And will Noah's death remain as a suicide? I hope not. You've really got the story moving along now, Jacob. Keep up the good work.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm glad she isn't letting Oliver get through to her. If he has it way he have her where she has no control over what she thinks. I can imagine she is going to get much about her family from this place. I think she might get more from her brother. What do I know. These people live in your head so I'll I have to wait. LOL

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.