The Morning After
It's not over until it's over, Girls!24 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have Jane as the last drunk awake! Yikes! She doesn't deserve the honor, and she may do something awful if she is the still conscious when no one else is. Like immediately put pictures of everyone online everywhere.
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You have Jane as the last drunk awake! Yikes! She doesn't deserve the honor, and she may do something awful if she is the still conscious when no one else is. Like immediately put pictures of everyone online everywhere.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from lyenochka
So you went one beyond and even gave us the status of the hotel after the partying Fanstorians from the clean up crew. I guess the party continues! Congratulations on the win!
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So you went one beyond and even gave us the status of the hotel after the partying Fanstorians from the clean up crew. I guess the party continues! Congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Carol.
You have a great take on entering the FS convention/party. You managed to capture the real character of the story villain. Jane Babies is the one person everybody would have been happy not to see. The throwaway cameras was a great idea. You did a good job of surveying the party and getting in on some of the hard partying that was going on there.
Robert
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Hello Carol.
You have a great take on entering the FS convention/party. You managed to capture the real character of the story villain. Jane Babies is the one person everybody would have been happy not to see. The throwaway cameras was a great idea. You did a good job of surveying the party and getting in on some of the hard partying that was going on there.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This story now is set to run and run because I want to know who's in the pics and the state of their undress. Perhaps now the day after the morning after and some good old healthy blackmailing and red faces? Faultlessly written, Carol, and an enjoyable read! Well done! Debbie
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This story now is set to run and run because I want to know who's in the pics and the state of their undress. Perhaps now the day after the morning after and some good old healthy blackmailing and red faces? Faultlessly written, Carol, and an enjoyable read! Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This line will dry the reader in: "Grace clapped a hand over her mouth. "Oh...my...goodness." a great setting for this story: "She reached for the doorknob again, but Grace grabbed her hand. "We can't go in there!"
"Why not? It's our job, and it's time for them to go."
"But, Maddy, their unmentionables are hanging from the chandeliers. They might be -- oh, gawd -- do you think they're -- naked?" Maddy laughed. "Wouldn't surprise me. It appears these writer folks like to give full rein to their imaginations. You know -- "Wild and Free." Remember that lady we let use the service elevator?" great job
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This line will dry the reader in: "Grace clapped a hand over her mouth. "Oh...my...goodness." a great setting for this story: "She reached for the doorknob again, but Grace grabbed her hand. "We can't go in there!"
"Why not? It's our job, and it's time for them to go."
"But, Maddy, their unmentionables are hanging from the chandeliers. They might be -- oh, gawd -- do you think they're -- naked?" Maddy laughed. "Wouldn't surprise me. It appears these writer folks like to give full rein to their imaginations. You know -- "Wild and Free." Remember that lady we let use the service elevator?" great job
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Sounds like Grace and Maddy might have some good blackmail material in those photos. This was an entertaining morning after story, Carol. It seems the fanstory convention has plenty of life in it.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Sounds like Grace and Maddy might have some good blackmail material in those photos. This was an entertaining morning after story, Carol. It seems the fanstory convention has plenty of life in it.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Valda. I just couldn't resist taking it sfor a spin one last time before we tucked it away until next year's convention. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. I appreciate it very much.
Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from gansach
Looks like we should be keeping our eyes peeled for some revealing FanArt photos and accompanying convention misbehavior revealed in the near future. This has been a blast reading all the different versions of what happened at the infamous FanStory Convention 2024. A wild and crazy bunch~all that creative imagination brought to bigger than life! A great time was had by all~your maid's view of the aftermath is perfect!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Looks like we should be keeping our eyes peeled for some revealing FanArt photos and accompanying convention misbehavior revealed in the near future. This has been a blast reading all the different versions of what happened at the infamous FanStory Convention 2024. A wild and crazy bunch~all that creative imagination brought to bigger than life! A great time was had by all~your maid's view of the aftermath is perfect!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I had so much fun writing the ending chapter that I just had to carry it over and I am thrilled you enjoyed it. Now, I shall tuck all those revealing photos away and move forward until the next convention.
Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
What a great job, keeping the story going. The FanStorians had a wild and crazy party with strippers and a food fight. I wouldn't want to be Grace or Maddy and have to clean up. By the way, you're having too much fun with this. Lol.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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What a great job, keeping the story going. The FanStorians had a wild and crazy party with strippers and a food fight. I wouldn't want to be Grace or Maddy and have to clean up. By the way, you're having too much fun with this. Lol.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I did have a lot of fun with the ending of Rachelle and Gretchen's convention party. But now, I've tucked those photos away until next year and moved on to something even bigger -- I hope.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from jmdg1954
Another excellent FanStory Convention post ... especially with the reemergence of Janie Babes, who woulda thunk it?
Totally different than the offers and extremely entertaining and engaging.
Ciao,
John
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Another excellent FanStory Convention post ... especially with the reemergence of Janie Babes, who woulda thunk it?
Totally different than the offers and extremely entertaining and engaging.
Ciao,
John
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I couldn't let the party end...and I wasn't going to be responsible for cleaning up all that mess...now it's on Grace and Maddy. With the pictures, they can blackmail someone else to do it. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Have a great November!
Comment from royowen
What a clever way to carry on your story and have it coincide with your own. the aftermath was pretty wild, with the smell of imbibed champagne, and Jane Babies was screeching, I'm back! Rachelle and Gretchen hey! Well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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What a clever way to carry on your story and have it coincide with your own. the aftermath was pretty wild, with the smell of imbibed champagne, and Jane Babies was screeching, I'm back! Rachelle and Gretchen hey! Well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for the review, Roy! Guess I hadn't had enough of the fun. Now I've tucked it away, and it's time for Eleanor to pop back into our lives. Can't wait to get started! have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
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