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Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Powder Keg"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024
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Wow! I'm elated! Thank you!
Comment from EeanBlack
I was just one of the bellhops. I was the other one with the biceps. I see one thing to question. I was told that when I post a short story or chapter on this site, I was NOT to indent. That is one thing I have to correct EVERY time I post. I will not be contributing to this novel, I have fewer inhibitions than the usual guy. These prompts are so cool. I'm curious, how can I start my own contest?
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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I was just one of the bellhops. I was the other one with the biceps. I see one thing to question. I was told that when I post a short story or chapter on this site, I was NOT to indent. That is one thing I have to correct EVERY time I post. I will not be contributing to this novel, I have fewer inhibitions than the usual guy. These prompts are so cool. I'm curious, how can I start my own contest?
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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There are two ways to do the contest. If you go the traditional route, just click the "Contest" icon - in white lettering beneath "Reviews" to the right of your screen - then click "Create a Contest" and follow the prompts. The participants pay a fee to FS, and the proceeds for the winner come from that.
The way Gretchen and I have done it, we choose whose stories we like the most (no one else gets a vote), and we are supplying the prize money from our own pockets.
Now, I did not ever heard that no-indentations rule! And no one has ever corrected me accordingly! Interesting. Why are they picking on you, I wonder?? Do you want me to go beat them up for you?...
You HAVE to post! Surely you can see that we're missing uninhibited contributors!! Come on, Eean! Give it your special touch. You could come away fifty FS dollars richer!!
xoxoxo
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Eh.
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Fiiiiiiiiine.
brat....
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And never call yourself a brat. It is "deliberately gross and inappropriate" for someone of your...Oh, who am I fooling?
Comment from Bill Schott
Well, what's to be said? This was the night of a million stars, as predicted, as the noted assemblage of the Fanstory contributors appear, as if called into a publisher's office to pick up a wheelbarrow of cash and a side order of sixes. So funny from start to finish, and I assume Jane's arrival will lead to an extended story. Terrific time. I'm pondering my piece.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Well, what's to be said? This was the night of a million stars, as predicted, as the noted assemblage of the Fanstory contributors appear, as if called into a publisher's office to pick up a wheelbarrow of cash and a side order of sixes. So funny from start to finish, and I assume Jane's arrival will lead to an extended story. Terrific time. I'm pondering my piece.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Oh, WONDERFUL!! I am very happy to read that! I hoped you would!!
Thank you for the nice review. Xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a funny idea! I loved every word. I was a little disappointed at your disclaimer that every outfit was described to you by people in the story. When I saw that you put Bill Schott in a tangerine blazer over a pea green shirt, I thought, "How does she do this?" That is so Bill! Oh well, maybe Bill dressed himself, but the John Travolta part was all you. And perfect.
Hate that I missed being in the story. With overnight company who wanted to eat at home almost every meal, I have not dared look at FanStory.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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What a funny idea! I loved every word. I was a little disappointed at your disclaimer that every outfit was described to you by people in the story. When I saw that you put Bill Schott in a tangerine blazer over a pea green shirt, I thought, "How does she do this?" That is so Bill! Oh well, maybe Bill dressed himself, but the John Travolta part was all you. And perfect.
Hate that I missed being in the story. With overnight company who wanted to eat at home almost every meal, I have not dared look at FanStory.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Now I understand. As much as I SOOO, so wanted you to be in the chapter, I didn't want to nag you by sending a "friendly reminder" after my initial invitation. I hope your guests took you and your husband out at least ONCE during their stay, oh, Scullery Wench! Sheesh!
Still,,,,you COULD write a chapter to contribute to the fun, though! Deadline's not until tomorrow at midnight, and I KNOW you could make the book rock-star fun and pizzazzy with your prowess!! Pleeeeease? At least think about it. That way, you're still part of the fun!
xoxoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! What a scene! And you included so many of us! This is a great gathering of people but as I said, I'm not a party person so I would be like a fish out of water. Yet, I'd enjoy getting to know everyone a bit more, well, except for that Jane character!
Great job with information gathering on the attire. You should have been a fashion designer in addition to dancer, opera singer, teacher, etc...
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wow! What a scene! And you included so many of us! This is a great gathering of people but as I said, I'm not a party person so I would be like a fish out of water. Yet, I'd enjoy getting to know everyone a bit more, well, except for that Jane character!
Great job with information gathering on the attire. You should have been a fashion designer in addition to dancer, opera singer, teacher, etc...
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I used to have a business making and designing attire, actually - for size 4 children and under. I loved it!
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Oh, so that's why you created all those lovely hats for your student's baby!
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Well, that and also bc when my student was four and in my dance class, she absolutely loved my hats.
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So cute!
Comment from Esther Brown
What a fabulous idea. I want to be there! I am such a novice on this site, but recognize most of the people you describe so well. The only conventions I have ever been to are medical. No alcohol for participants attending classes, won't get our credits. I can't wait to read all the entries. Esther
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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What a fabulous idea. I want to be there! I am such a novice on this site, but recognize most of the people you describe so well. The only conventions I have ever been to are medical. No alcohol for participants attending classes, won't get our credits. I can't wait to read all the entries. Esther
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Esther.
Gretchen and I would love it if you'd add your own chapter to the story. You're a good writer, Esther. You'd make it delightful! Please give it some thought. xoxox
Comment from Ulla
Hi to both of you, this was hilarious. I really enjoyed reading this and how you presented so many writers from here. I may take you up on the invite and add a little input myself. We'll see. You just nailed it. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Hi to both of you, this was hilarious. I really enjoyed reading this and how you presented so many writers from here. I may take you up on the invite and add a little input myself. We'll see. You just nailed it. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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We would LOVE that, Ulla!! The more, the merrier!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Rachelle,
Sorry Ruby (my faithful dog) and I couldn't make the Fanstory Convention!
We decided not to go, because someone stole our designer gowns and we were left with jeans and t shirts until our wardrobes could be replenished. lol. Even reading your story in my cozy abode, I feel horribly undressed.
Were there any dogs there?
Seriously,
Your work is absolutely as stunning as your descriptions of the garb and personalities of your convention.
I felt I knew most of the characters you describe; your narration is exquisite.
Exceptional story, Rachelle.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Rachelle,
Sorry Ruby (my faithful dog) and I couldn't make the Fanstory Convention!
We decided not to go, because someone stole our designer gowns and we were left with jeans and t shirts until our wardrobes could be replenished. lol. Even reading your story in my cozy abode, I feel horribly undressed.
Were there any dogs there?
Seriously,
Your work is absolutely as stunning as your descriptions of the garb and personalities of your convention.
I felt I knew most of the characters you describe; your narration is exquisite.
Exceptional story, Rachelle.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Wowie zowie! What a wonderful review!! Thank you for the warmth and encouragement! Xoxoxo
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Wowie zowie! What a wonderful review!! Thank you for the warmth and encouragement! Xoxoxo
Comment from Neonewman
This was hilarious! I lost it on sooooooo maaaaaany levels, lol. I knew Jane Babies would crash the party! Not really; I had forgotten about her until the end, lol. SAS shoes I have to wear at work. I nearly crapped my pants when I got to this part. OMG! I still have Gretchen's to read.
Believe it or not, I found I small blip, sorry.
Laugh(t)er fills the room once again. What can I say? You're a great teacher.
I will check out the YOUR INVITED.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This was hilarious! I lost it on sooooooo maaaaaany levels, lol. I knew Jane Babies would crash the party! Not really; I had forgotten about her until the end, lol. SAS shoes I have to wear at work. I nearly crapped my pants when I got to this part. OMG! I still have Gretchen's to read.
Believe it or not, I found I small blip, sorry.
Laugh(t)er fills the room once again. What can I say? You're a great teacher.
I will check out the YOUR INVITED.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the catch and all the kudos, Sweet Steve!! I appreciate the ❤️. Xoxoxo
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Thanks for the catch and all the kudos, Sweet Steve!! I appreciate the ❤️. Xoxoxo
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Anytime, sunshine.
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lol.
xoxox
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love all the details you put into the outfits that each FanStorian is wearing. It's great that you asked each one about his or her clothing. Oh, no, Jane is there, so the drama will continue. So much fun! Carol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I love all the details you put into the outfits that each FanStorian is wearing. It's great that you asked each one about his or her clothing. Oh, no, Jane is there, so the drama will continue. So much fun! Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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FEAR NOT! Gretchen's chapter gets rid of her!!
Thanks for the wonderful review!
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Yes, I've read her chapter, and several additions by FS friends. Such a fun idea!
Carol