A Park Bench on Sunday
A promise without bounds...12 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a great flash fiction story you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words that went well with the picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a great flash fiction story you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used great descriptive words that went well with the picture. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Yvette!
How I have missed your writing whether it be poetry or prose.
Your story flows so well, and I could well envision the surroundings.
Loved your description of the old lady... and Henry's eyes...
Congratulations on your win!
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
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Good morning, Yvette!
How I have missed your writing whether it be poetry or prose.
Your story flows so well, and I could well envision the surroundings.
Loved your description of the old lady... and Henry's eyes...
Congratulations on your win!
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I really like this line: I turned and caught a glimpse of the warmest eyes ever placed on such a weathered face.
I read in your profile that you like to write fantasy, so I knew where this was going. Still, a lovely read - romance never goes out of style. Dead or alive:-)
I love reading and writing flash fiction, so I especially enjoyed this.
Is this a contest? If so, I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
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I really like this line: I turned and caught a glimpse of the warmest eyes ever placed on such a weathered face.
I read in your profile that you like to write fantasy, so I knew where this was going. Still, a lovely read - romance never goes out of style. Dead or alive:-)
I love reading and writing flash fiction, so I especially enjoyed this.
Is this a contest? If so, I wish you luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette.
What a great story. Your descriptors and your narrative kept the secret right until the end. It's Very touching. And a well written story. Sometimes it doesn't take many words to describe a really good one. Congratulations on your win.
Z.
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Hey Yvette.
What a great story. Your descriptors and your narrative kept the secret right until the end. It's Very touching. And a well written story. Sometimes it doesn't take many words to describe a really good one. Congratulations on your win.
Z.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from Gayla putnam
Wiping tears from my eyes. What a heart-warming story, and it was so well written. I was freezing my butt off on the bench right along with Alicia. You made all the characters believable, and I cared about them immediately. I liked your last line. "A promise is a promise, baby. gayla
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Wiping tears from my eyes. What a heart-warming story, and it was so well written. I was freezing my butt off on the bench right along with Alicia. You made all the characters believable, and I cared about them immediately. I liked your last line. "A promise is a promise, baby. gayla
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
Comment from Charles D Ezell
I was thinking about the scripture where the Apostle Paul wrote how we entertained angels unaware. I know this is just a story, but never sell the fact we do entertain them short. I liked your story , you did good.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I was thinking about the scripture where the Apostle Paul wrote how we entertained angels unaware. I know this is just a story, but never sell the fact we do entertain them short. I liked your story , you did good.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I, too, believe that there are angels among us.... 'entertaining angels' in many different aspects of that term... Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from gansach
This is a great entry for the Flash Fiction writing prompt competition. A sweet story of a love that lasts beyond death and is strong enough to keep promises made during life. Very nicely done!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This is a great entry for the Flash Fiction writing prompt competition. A sweet story of a love that lasts beyond death and is strong enough to keep promises made during life. Very nicely done!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your review today!!
Comment from Begin Again
Awesome! It also brought tears to my eyes. I couldn't help but imagine what it would be like to have the love of my life keep his promise like that. I suppose, in other ways, he does. I enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Awesome! It also brought tears to my eyes. I couldn't help but imagine what it would be like to have the love of my life keep his promise like that. I suppose, in other ways, he does. I enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your review today - hope they were happy tears!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a ghostly story with a warm embrace here and I enjoyed this flash fiction. A well written and entertaining post for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is a ghostly story with a warm embrace here and I enjoyed this flash fiction. A well written and entertaining post for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a lovely ghost romance story! I can't imagine how I'd react if it happened to me. You told the tale well...I felt cold reading it. Haha!
Well done and best of luck with the contest!
Julie
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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This is a lovely ghost romance story! I can't imagine how I'd react if it happened to me. You told the tale well...I felt cold reading it. Haha!
Well done and best of luck with the contest!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!