Wisdom is Action
didactic cinquain potlatch club14 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I'm starting to pick up more and more of the nuances of syllables and thoughts behind these unique poetry forms. (That all started when I joined Gypsy's Japanese Poetry Club this past summer.) This cinquain of yours is fun to read, and, I bet, was quite challenging to perfect. They're nowhere near as easy as they may project! xoxox
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I'm starting to pick up more and more of the nuances of syllables and thoughts behind these unique poetry forms. (That all started when I joined Gypsy's Japanese Poetry Club this past summer.) This cinquain of yours is fun to read, and, I bet, was quite challenging to perfect. They're nowhere near as easy as they may project! xoxox
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks a lot, Rachelle,
Yes the clubs really help you learn. I am in three of them. One Is Gypsy's haiku club.
Joan
Comment from Jacob1395
Knowledge has always been seen as something that is really powerful, and that is certainly true, the more knowledge you have, the powerful you are. A well written piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Knowledge has always been seen as something that is really powerful, and that is certainly true, the more knowledge you have, the powerful you are. A well written piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Jacob, for the nice review. I appreciate it very much.
Joan
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
One acquires wisdom over the years. And those things you listed in your poem are important.
That said, I would add that we all make mistakes in life.
What is important though is to learn from them so that the next time we face a problem, we will be more prepared.
Our elders have experienced much and can help the younger generations in their life's journey.
We need to take care of our elders and listen to their pearls of wisdom.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
One acquires wisdom over the years. And those things you listed in your poem are important.
That said, I would add that we all make mistakes in life.
What is important though is to learn from them so that the next time we face a problem, we will be more prepared.
Our elders have experienced much and can help the younger generations in their life's journey.
We need to take care of our elders and listen to their pearls of wisdom.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks for you your review and comments, Tempest.
Joan
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello, Joan.
This is a well conceived and well written version of a cinquain poem. You have met the style standard and have delivered a very coherent message.
Robert.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hello, Joan.
This is a well conceived and well written version of a cinquain poem. You have met the style standard and have delivered a very coherent message.
Robert.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks for this terse but thorough review, Robert.
Joan
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Joan.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Knowledge is important and makes us more aware.
-By studying, we improve our lives.
-Very good synonyms complete the poem.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Joan.
-You did a good job with the form and topic.
-Knowledge is important and makes us more aware.
-By studying, we improve our lives.
-Very good synonyms complete the poem.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the encouraging review, Pam.
Joan
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You are welcome, Joan.
Comment from godlucifer
its appropriate on how we learn from knowledge and how wise we get from wisdon. your poem was well define and well written. thanks for the read.
yours truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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its appropriate on how we learn from knowledge and how wise we get from wisdon. your poem was well define and well written. thanks for the read.
yours truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks, godlucifer, for reading and reviewing my poem. Both are much appreciated.
Joan
P S I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to the book at the end of my profile.
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Joan, this is a wonderful cinquain poem with a great message. It's actually scriptural that knowledge and wisdom go hand in hand, and one is dependent on the other to bring success and blessings. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal Xo
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Dear Joan, this is a wonderful cinquain poem with a great message. It's actually scriptural that knowledge and wisdom go hand in hand, and one is dependent on the other to bring success and blessings. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Sending you my very best today as always.
Sal Xo
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Hi Sally,
Thanks for the nice comments and realizing the spiritual connection.
Joan
Comment from gansach
This is a very good cinquain that covers all the requirements for the club entry and achieves its purpose to teach. The choice of your subject and your words is excellent and conveys your message perfectly. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This is a very good cinquain that covers all the requirements for the club entry and achieves its purpose to teach. The choice of your subject and your words is excellent and conveys your message perfectly. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Gail, for the nice review.
Joan
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent cinquain Joan, with the correct way that you've presented it, and done an extremely good job on this one, the way you've laid it out is great well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This is an excellent cinquain Joan, with the correct way that you've presented it, and done an extremely good job on this one, the way you've laid it out is great well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the encouraging works and all the stars, Roy. Both are much appreciated
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Most welcome Joan
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Very good job on this cinquain poem. Knowledge is definitely the key that opens many doors and makes it easier to understand where we came from and where our country is going. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Very good job on this cinquain poem. Knowledge is definitely the key that opens many doors and makes it easier to understand where we came from and where our country is going. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Hi Blue Hendrix,
I appreciate the kind words and generous rating. Both are much appreciated.
Joan
P S I have just published a book called "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. I have a link to it at the end of my profile.