The Empty Chair
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I wouldn't believe Fiona's apology or get sucked back in, sister or not. You have created a really wicked sister in this story, Carol I just hope it's notFiona that wins the day, but at least Detective Harris isn't as gullable as she thinks he is.
well done, cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I wouldn't believe Fiona's apology or get sucked back in, sister or not. You have created a really wicked sister in this story, Carol I just hope it's notFiona that wins the day, but at least Detective Harris isn't as gullable as she thinks he is.
well done, cheers,
valda
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh you are so kind. I so appreciate your comments and the awesome stars. Thank you so much. Have an awesome day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
As in life, not always are things as they seem. And the good and the bad persons are even harder to identify just by looking at the evidence. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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As in life, not always are things as they seem. And the good and the bad persons are even harder to identify just by looking at the evidence. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Hello! Thanks for stopping to read another chapter of this crazy story. I appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your writing is always so impressive and it is so very well. You are a very good writer and I always enjoy listening to your work. Patricia.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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This is very well written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your writing is always so impressive and it is so very well. You are a very good writer and I always enjoy listening to your work. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thanks as always for listening to my story and enjoying it. Appreciate the review, Patricia. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
My goodness - Fiona is quite evil. I wonder what the full back story is. Neither is to be trusted. Fiona's schemes show a cunning intellect and very real hatred for her twin, whatever the twin has done to her.Interesting and gripping story.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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My goodness - Fiona is quite evil. I wonder what the full back story is. Neither is to be trusted. Fiona's schemes show a cunning intellect and very real hatred for her twin, whatever the twin has done to her.Interesting and gripping story.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Fiona always felt left behind because she was in the wheelchair and in order to deal with her pain, she blamed Sharice for ruining everything. When she discovered she could get out of the chair, she thought it was time for payback. Sad!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Fiona is crazy as a loon... and do we know Peyton is dead? I don't think that was revealed! Does Sharice have a death wish of her own? Both twins are certifiable!
What of Fiona getting up and out of that wheelchair last chapter?
You have me twisted in knots here!
A good thing--since I can't wait for the next chapter!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Fiona is crazy as a loon... and do we know Peyton is dead? I don't think that was revealed! Does Sharice have a death wish of her own? Both twins are certifiable!
What of Fiona getting up and out of that wheelchair last chapter?
You have me twisted in knots here!
A good thing--since I can't wait for the next chapter!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Getting out of the wheelchair is something that Fiona plans on remaining a secret...something she can use to her advantage. Sharice on the other hand feels that she owes Fiona because she had the childhood that Fiona never had.
Smiles, Carol
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This has bizarre shades of "What Ever Happened to Baby Jane" with the Twilight Zone flavor of hot sauce. Evil yet I can't get enough!
Comment from LJbutterfly
And the plot thickens. Fiona is the very evil twin who is shrewd and calculating enough to frame her sister. Unfortunately, Sharice has already been caught in a lie when she originally said she was not pregnant. She just ran out the door. Hopefully she devises a plan before her sister makes her look even more guilty.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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And the plot thickens. Fiona is the very evil twin who is shrewd and calculating enough to frame her sister. Unfortunately, Sharice has already been caught in a lie when she originally said she was not pregnant. She just ran out the door. Hopefully she devises a plan before her sister makes her look even more guilty.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Fiona has had a long time to devise her plan to get even with her sister and I fear Sharice plays right into her hand. Thanks for enjoying this creepy story. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm thinking Fiona is crazy like a fox and wants to destroy her twin's life. Is it because there is a baby on the way or is there an inheritance, or is Payton alive and imprisoned somewhere and he thinks Sharice did this to him because Fiona can actually walk and make herself look like her twin?
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I'm thinking Fiona is crazy like a fox and wants to destroy her twin's life. Is it because there is a baby on the way or is there an inheritance, or is Payton alive and imprisoned somewhere and he thinks Sharice did this to him because Fiona can actually walk and make herself look like her twin?
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Lots of questions and motives, huh? Fiona is wicked and crazy. She blames Sharice for her lost childhood while being in the wheelchair and discovering she can walk again was the open door for payback. Creepy, huh?
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Nasty little turn of events! Carol you capture this story and serve it up as a fine delicate morsel of poison. Love, suspicion, twins in love with the same man and revenge. You do this so well. Scary good. Esther
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Nasty little turn of events! Carol you capture this story and serve it up as a fine delicate morsel of poison. Love, suspicion, twins in love with the same man and revenge. You do this so well. Scary good. Esther
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Fiona is a wicked one, Huh? Her mind says that Sharice had a life that she should have had too and she thinks payback is the answer. Wonder if she's smart enough to pull it off?
Smiles, Carol
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I guess we will see....
Comment from royowen
So Fiona is plotting to implicate Sharice into appearing to be guilty of trying to kill her sister, how fascinating to read this, Carol, it doesn't seem possible that two sisters could be in such a pickle, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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So Fiona is plotting to implicate Sharice into appearing to be guilty of trying to kill her sister, how fascinating to read this, Carol, it doesn't seem possible that two sisters could be in such a pickle, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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A strange and creepy situation, huh? Hopefully it's just the season playing havoc with my thoughts and we can go back to the norm. I so appreciate the kindness and the stars.
Smiles, Carol
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Certainly a variation to your normal stuff.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another interesting chapter! Wow, it's hard to believe Fiona would poison the tea, and then drink it. She's really out for revenge. Perfect timing with Sharice lunging at her and her chair overturning, just before Detective Harris returns. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Another interesting chapter! Wow, it's hard to believe Fiona would poison the tea, and then drink it. She's really out for revenge. Perfect timing with Sharice lunging at her and her chair overturning, just before Detective Harris returns. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much for following this creepy story. It's not going to be a long one. May a couple more chapters.
Smiles, Carol
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It's a good story, with lots of suspense. Yes, a little creepy, lol.