If I Could Be Again
A 1-9-1 poem4 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, yes, we can all relate to wanting to chase waves with the energy of a kid. My favorite part is their contagious laughter. Great scene captured in 11 syllables! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Ah, yes, we can all relate to wanting to chase waves with the energy of a kid. My favorite part is their contagious laughter. Great scene captured in 11 syllables! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, lyenochka, for your kind praise of this very short poem. Have a great day! Rod
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Im in bed it's 24.40 and I m taking a last peek on fanstory and I read your poem.
You wrapped up in those 11 syllables how I feel.
Everything I love is disappearing, our country is fallen apart and there is nothing but gloom on the horizon.
I still have my pine forest , I go there to escape from the grim reality.
I also wish I could be that CAREFREE child that loved to trap tadpoles in a corner of the creek and watch them grow. I was a tomboy ( biggrin)
Congratulations on your ribbon win , I'm surprised your bittersweet poem did not get a sixer .
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
Im in bed it's 24.40 and I m taking a last peek on fanstory and I read your poem.
You wrapped up in those 11 syllables how I feel.
Everything I love is disappearing, our country is fallen apart and there is nothing but gloom on the horizon.
I still have my pine forest , I go there to escape from the grim reality.
I also wish I could be that CAREFREE child that loved to trap tadpoles in a corner of the creek and watch them grow. I was a tomboy ( biggrin)
Congratulations on your ribbon win , I'm surprised your bittersweet poem did not get a sixer .
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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FanStory is not accepting my replies again. Thank you so much, tempeste, for your praise, all those stars, and your continuous support. Rod
Comment from Begin Again
The innocense of childhood and not fearing anything... not even a wave twice as tall as you. It's a shame that as we age, it disappears. Great poem.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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The innocense of childhood and not fearing anything... not even a wave twice as tall as you. It's a shame that as we age, it disappears. Great poem.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Yes, it is a shame that innocence disappears with age. Many thanks for your kind praise, Carol.
Comment from Kahlani
Oh, those were the days. What wonderful memories this poem and picture conjure up. I miss those days, but then again, I wouldn't have the wisdom I do today.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Oh, those were the days. What wonderful memories this poem and picture conjure up. I miss those days, but then again, I wouldn't have the wisdom I do today.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Kahlani, for sharing 9my poem and your comments.