Let Me Paint You My Dream
If you can...8 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and may God bless you and bless your work and pray that you will have a wonderful week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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This is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and may God bless you and bless your work and pray that you will have a wonderful week. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this boy toy entry. I have a unique style of writing, so I've been told, easily identifiable even if a blind contest. Have posted another since this release, and have another in the hopper.
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah well I can see you really had fun with this. And it really was an enjoyable story to read.
I think we have all at one time or another been woken up at the wrong time while having the best dream ever! I loved, 'where a trillion stars sparkled in concert' you set or should I say painter a lovely serene dream.
Well done and good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Ah well I can see you really had fun with this. And it really was an enjoyable story to read.
I think we have all at one time or another been woken up at the wrong time while having the best dream ever! I loved, 'where a trillion stars sparkled in concert' you set or should I say painter a lovely serene dream.
Well done and good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Third time a charm? Already thanked you for your comment, but the past two SAVES obviously did nnot take.
Comment from Wendy G
How annoying it is to suddenly be statled into wakefulness whilst in the middle of a beautiful and pleasing dream, and then not to be able to reimmerse yourself within it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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How annoying it is to suddenly be statled into wakefulness whilst in the middle of a beautiful and pleasing dream, and then not to be able to reimmerse yourself within it. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the comment. I hope it was enjoyable.
Comment from RodG
I like how you describe your dream in paragraph one and put me there in that birch canoe drifting along that moonlit stream on a cool, silent star-laden night. Although I like your humor, I wish you could have continued the dream.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I like how you describe your dream in paragraph one and put me there in that birch canoe drifting along that moonlit stream on a cool, silent star-laden night. Although I like your humor, I wish you could have continued the dream.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Me too, but the gods weren't with me, as the story told was the event that occurred last night. Really.
Thanks for your comment.
Comment from Kahlani
It was a lovely scene you were painting before the phone rudely interrupted your daydreaming. I hope that you manage to get back into your writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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It was a lovely scene you were painting before the phone rudely interrupted your daydreaming. I hope that you manage to get back into your writing. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Since this was in real time last night, and the story is true, I tried to resume what I had dreamed but nada, zilch, nothing occurred. Thanks for your remark, Kahlani. Are you in or from Hawaii (Oahu)? The Big Island? Molokai?
Comment from Begin Again
You painted a very beautiful and calming picture, and I, too, wanted to drift there, enjoying the serene moment under the stars. I hate those unwanted phone calls, especially ones that come in the middle of the night. Too bad there isn't a replay button on those dreams.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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You painted a very beautiful and calming picture, and I, too, wanted to drift there, enjoying the serene moment under the stars. I hate those unwanted phone calls, especially ones that come in the middle of the night. Too bad there isn't a replay button on those dreams.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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I concur with your wishing for a replay button, and appreciate your read and remark.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an enchanting dream you've described here! I love how you capture the beauty of the scene. I could almost feel the coolness of the night and see the stars sparkling above. It was funny when you got the phone call! . Thank you for sharing this magical moment. You share a lovely picture!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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What an enchanting dream you've described here! I love how you capture the beauty of the scene. I could almost feel the coolness of the night and see the stars sparkling above. It was funny when you got the phone call! . Thank you for sharing this magical moment. You share a lovely picture!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Michael
It has been some time since I heard from you
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Thank you, Michael
It has been some time since I heard from you
Comment from pome lover
well, I had to laugh after you set the mood with all that dreamy dream, and the phone rang and it was a wrong number. Now, that was funny.
At least, to me.
Best of luck in the Paint a dream in words contest.
Katharine
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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well, I had to laugh after you set the mood with all that dreamy dream, and the phone rang and it was a wrong number. Now, that was funny.
At least, to me.
Best of luck in the Paint a dream in words contest.
Katharine
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, fear FStorian friend. I am glad you enjoyed it.