His Silence
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
The cinch is beginning to tighten around Danielle and Callum. Control is oozing out of all of them. A little love interest for Callum...hmmm...
Very engaging, my friend. It's still as good now as it was in the beginning. Great way to keep the interest going.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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The cinch is beginning to tighten around Danielle and Callum. Control is oozing out of all of them. A little love interest for Callum...hmmm...
Very engaging, my friend. It's still as good now as it was in the beginning. Great way to keep the interest going.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you're enjoying it.
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You're welcome. It's delightful.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It seems as if Danielle is thinking of Callum as more than a brother, but it is hard to break old habits. It also seems as if they are being watched and not quite trusted.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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It seems as if Danielle is thinking of Callum as more than a brother, but it is hard to break old habits. It also seems as if they are being watched and not quite trusted.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Noah may know something. I don't like all this secrecy. They are hiding something. I worry about Danielle and Callum's safety.
If we were on the other side of the house we would've been able to have escaped onto the driveway. (house,)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Noah may know something. I don't like all this secrecy. They are hiding something. I worry about Danielle and Callum's safety.
If we were on the other side of the house we would've been able to have escaped onto the driveway. (house,)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Try as she may, Danielle, still can't get answers and the worrying thing for her is if Callum becomes hooked on Eve which could increase his commitment to the centre and narrow his perspective. All very intriguing, Jacob. And you keep that mystery going. Well done! Edits below. Debbie
Thank God (,) Abraham
man(a)ged
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Try as she may, Danielle, still can't get answers and the worrying thing for her is if Callum becomes hooked on Eve which could increase his commitment to the centre and narrow his perspective. All very intriguing, Jacob. And you keep that mystery going. Well done! Edits below. Debbie
Thank God (,) Abraham
man(a)ged
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter really drew me in! What a complex narrative. I love how you create the atmosphere, especially with the muddy field. Your portrayal of Grace's inner conflict is so well done. The dialogue feels natural. I'm interested about what will happen next. Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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This chapter really drew me in! What a complex narrative. I love how you create the atmosphere, especially with the muddy field. Your portrayal of Grace's inner conflict is so well done. The dialogue feels natural. I'm interested about what will happen next. Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you Michael, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
New information is hard to come by. It looks as though Eve thinks she might have met her soulmate, and Danielle is just a bit jealous although she thinks she isn't interested in him in that way. It wouldn't be good if she is ready and anxious to leave and Callum has fallen for Eve and decided to stay
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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New information is hard to come by. It looks as though Eve thinks she might have met her soulmate, and Danielle is just a bit jealous although she thinks she isn't interested in him in that way. It wouldn't be good if she is ready and anxious to leave and Callum has fallen for Eve and decided to stay
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Spies are watching from every direction. I have a feeling nothing gets past Mary or Oliver... or almost anyone, I suppose. Like a streaming network! Danielle and Callum don't know anything more than they did. And Eve has her sights set on Callum, I think. Another good chapter, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Spies are watching from every direction. I have a feeling nothing gets past Mary or Oliver... or almost anyone, I suppose. Like a streaming network! Danielle and Callum don't know anything more than they did. And Eve has her sights set on Callum, I think. Another good chapter, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.