Love's Silent Rush
when two heartstrings blush4 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what love can do when someone tells us how much they love us and I enjoyed your matching rhymes here too, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
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This is what love can do when someone tells us how much they love us and I enjoyed your matching rhymes here too, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the flow pf upir [pe,! The The use of "rush" at the end adds a sense of urgency. This feels like a dream that is quickly fading. You do a wonderful job of sharing a moment that is tender but also feels fleeting. Lovely work!
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I love the flow pf upir [pe,! The The use of "rush" at the end adds a sense of urgency. This feels like a dream that is quickly fading. You do a wonderful job of sharing a moment that is tender but also feels fleeting. Lovely work!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
This romantic poem meets the 1-6-1 contest entry requirements. The rhymes are perfect and flowed smoothly. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. And good luck in the contest. Well done.
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This romantic poem meets the 1-6-1 contest entry requirements. The rhymes are perfect and flowed smoothly. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. And good luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
Clever little put together . Love the image and thanks for sharing. Had me rushing to my dictionary for the meaning of susurrant. Always learning.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Clever little put together . Love the image and thanks for sharing. Had me rushing to my dictionary for the meaning of susurrant. Always learning.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
