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2024 Gypsy's Free Verse

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Comment from shelley kaye
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there was kfc, big macs, and diet coke back then? LOL!!

fun free verse!
good imagery
smooth flow
and cool presentation

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley. Happy Weekend!

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I like your version much better! That really made me smile as it was so unexpected and humorous! Beautifully presented (my second delight this evening). Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie. Happy Weekend!

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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That's funny. The parady of Midas. Had me thinking about Goldfinger on the Austin Powers movie. Good for a laugh, that id always welcome. Have a great weekend
RJ

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much,
    I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 12-Oct-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Ha, another fine poem, Gypsy....it's a sickening thing to watch and an even more sickening to to watch those millions see no problem. What character flaws?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much,
    I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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Isn't that such a shame? That's a good parable for all of us. Some people would rather lose the most important things in life like our relationships with the ones we love for riches. Great message!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Big Sister.

    love 😘

    MariVal
Comment from patcelaw
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I have been on fan story now for 10 years and I believe this is a very first time I seen a poem written about King Midas. It is very well done. Yes sometimes things turning to go can be a curse and not a blessing. Patricia.


 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much,
    I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Gypsy 😊