Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Congratulations on your win! I had to read this. It's just jam-packed with Halloween fun and frolics. I like the way your colourful depiction of the season is set to the verse by Clement Moore Twas the Night before Christmas. This is entertaining and a joy to read. My favourite stanza is the 5th one with the full gamut of Halloween characters. Well done and a deserved win! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thanks for the review.

Comment from dragonpoet

Exceptional

Hi Jake
This is a well done Halloween rendition of "The Night Before Christmas. You get the fun and the fright of the night rolled into one.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and say healthy.
Have a terrific rest of the weekend
Joan
P S I would like to let you know I just published my first book title, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry." I have supplied a link to it on Amazon.com at the bottom of my profile/bio page.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thanks for the review and six star rating!

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Nov-2024

You are most kindly welcome on both counts, Jake.
Joan

Comment from Contests

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thanks for the review and seven stars.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

This is simply a treat, with a nod to Christmas too. A tapestry of color, sounds and all the many trappings of the season of Halloween. Wish I had 6 remaining. So well done.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like such a fun Halloween as you included all the fun of this halloween celebration here and I enjoyed your rhymes and metre, although some lines were a little bumpy, I still enjoyed the ride Jake, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This is a clever adaptation to Twas the Night Before Christmas. All the Halloween/trick or treating elements lined up perfectly. It seemed like some of this was kids out doing their thing and some was visitors from the dark side.
Very cleverly done!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review.