A Cold Embrace
An acrostic dealing with loss2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an emotionally charged poem! Your imagery is striking. Especially the way you describe the tension trying to reach Helen. I could feel the shift from hope to despair. I felt the weight of every line as you shared the fragility of life. Well done!
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What an emotionally charged poem! Your imagery is striking. Especially the way you describe the tension trying to reach Helen. I could feel the shift from hope to despair. I felt the weight of every line as you shared the fragility of life. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
What a tragic moment it would be to find the one you love has died, and you can't do anything to save them. This poem has pushed me to go ahead and tell my other half how much I love him. Thank you for the reminder.
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What a tragic moment it would be to find the one you love has died, and you can't do anything to save them. This poem has pushed me to go ahead and tell my other half how much I love him. Thank you for the reminder.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024