Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

You have shared a very nice story in a poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest that you have a lovely evening and may God bless you, Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Thank you, @patcelaw. Very much appreciated.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Did you actually take that photo? If so, you are multi-talented! This was an eloquent description of the many sights and feelings God allows us if we just stop and quietly observe. The poem flowed very smoothly.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

This particular photo, no. But it represents the piece very well, thanks.

reply by jim vecchio on 10-Oct-2024

Thank you anyhow for a wonderful post.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Weren't you blessed! You thought you were wasting time and the Lord painted you a picture and you used your words to show it to each of us and to feel the moment.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Absolutely, thanks again.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You captured a moment in time here as we love watching sunsets and the activity in our ambient skies, I enjoyed your sweet natured story, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Wow, what can I say. Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from Brandy N. Morrison

Excellent

This poem paints a peaceful, reflective moment, watching the sunset with a quiet sense of wonder. The imagery feels familiar and calming, making it easy to picture. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Thanks, Brandy, much appreciated.