2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 93 "~* Tonight *~".
10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful sharing of sight and hearing and, most importantly, the whirlwind feelings of a teen in love... beautifully done, my lady!! ;) Thanx for sharing that piece of you! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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What a wonderful sharing of sight and hearing and, most importantly, the whirlwind feelings of a teen in love... beautifully done, my lady!! ;) Thanx for sharing that piece of you! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So romantic and so sensual, yet so innocent. Those are the best kind, and I honestly believe the most sensual because our imagination takes over. Thank you for sharing this perfect poem and perfect presentation with us.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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So romantic and so sensual, yet so innocent. Those are the best kind, and I honestly believe the most sensual because our imagination takes over. Thank you for sharing this perfect poem and perfect presentation with us.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Marival ❤️
Comment from lyenochka
I feel so sad thinking about how you were separated from your first love. We can't imagine how life would have been if you stayed in Spain but I'm glad we met here. Our real first love is God Who loved us from before we were born.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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I feel so sad thinking about how you were separated from your first love. We can't imagine how life would have been if you stayed in Spain but I'm glad we met here. Our real first love is God Who loved us from before we were born.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Sometimes I think about going back to Spain but I couldn't live so far away from my children. If I didn't come to the usa I wouldn't have my precious children and grandchildren... and you
It all worked out for the best.
The first time I went back to Spain he had a girlfriend, they are probably married and with children. He was the only man that treated me with true love.
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💖 We all have regrets. But you are a blessing here and all the lives you touched in your work. So God had a plan for you. He's our real love anyway.
Comment from GWHARGIS
There really isn't any feeling quite like that first pang of love. The hopefulness, the butterflies. It is a fabulous feeling. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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There really isn't any feeling quite like that first pang of love. The hopefulness, the butterflies. It is a fabulous feeling. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
That was beautiful, Gypsy. It is a mesmerizing piece from beginning to end. Your talent is asphyxiating, my friend. The artwork is always spot-on.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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That was beautiful, Gypsy. It is a mesmerizing piece from beginning to end. Your talent is asphyxiating, my friend. The artwork is always spot-on.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 09-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Wendy G
This is beautifully written and presented, your words being as sensuous as the image. The writing has a sense of lingering and sad regret. It's a very poignant piece. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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This is beautifully written and presented, your words being as sensuous as the image. The writing has a sense of lingering and sad regret. It's a very poignant piece. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Your love is always quite emotionally charged. Your wirds express this feeling very well. The theme is also quite revealed by the volor scheme.l have never forgotten my first love and I believe it made me a stronger and wider man.
RJ
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Your love is always quite emotionally charged. Your wirds express this feeling very well. The theme is also quite revealed by the volor scheme.l have never forgotten my first love and I believe it made me a stronger and wider man.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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I meant to say first love. You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Frank Malley
"Tonight," an exceptional poem about a recalled relationship, uses free verse in short lines to present recollections, visual and sensual, about a long ago love. I best liked the couplet "Sunrises and sunsets/drowned in our eyes."
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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"Tonight," an exceptional poem about a recalled relationship, uses free verse in short lines to present recollections, visual and sensual, about a long ago love. I best liked the couplet "Sunrises and sunsets/drowned in our eyes."
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, frank. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely, mesmerising free verse about loss and memories of the past, beautifully presented. I enjoyed the way it starts and finishes with the same word, 'tonight,' giving the verse a very satisfying sense of completion and resolution. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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A lovely, mesmerising free verse about loss and memories of the past, beautifully presented. I enjoyed the way it starts and finishes with the same word, 'tonight,' giving the verse a very satisfying sense of completion and resolution. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh learned a new word - susurrus - me likey!
great imagery reflection of lost love
strong word choices and smooth flow
and i love the black and white photo to end it
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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ooh learned a new word - susurrus - me likey!
great imagery reflection of lost love
strong word choices and smooth flow
and i love the black and white photo to end it
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊