Nature's Finest
Looking at the beauty of a spider's web5 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is terrific. I love how you describe the threads as "fine, velvety labyrinths" - that creates such a clear picture in my mind. The word choices are fanastic including weaving "divine tapestries". This flows smoothly and was a joy to read. Great job!
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This is terrific. I love how you describe the threads as "fine, velvety labyrinths" - that creates such a clear picture in my mind. The word choices are fanastic including weaving "divine tapestries". This flows smoothly and was a joy to read. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
Yes - a Nonet that portrays the many intricacies of a spider's web and how strong it is to withstand even harsh climatic conditions - Nature truly is amazing.
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Yes - a Nonet that portrays the many intricacies of a spider's web and how strong it is to withstand even harsh climatic conditions - Nature truly is amazing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Kahlani.
-You wrote a good nonet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, good syllable count,
shape and use of different fonts.
-A very good opening line and your
description of their "divine tapestries."
-Very good detail about the nature of their web,
and very good concluding lines.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Kahlani.
-You wrote a good nonet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, good syllable count,
shape and use of different fonts.
-A very good opening line and your
description of their "divine tapestries."
-Very good detail about the nature of their web,
and very good concluding lines.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful feedback. Have a great day.
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You are very welcome and have a great day, too.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is a fine Nonet about nature's spider webs - they really are fine spun labyrinths they can stand up to anything Nature throws at them.
In a perfect Nonet, is it supposed to resemble an upside down triangle. Someone here told me once that the actual visual is important too. Your lines are long in places for that.
I like the poem, just wanted to mention that in case there's something in the "rules" that suggest it.
Good luck, Kahlani:-)
Pam
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This is a fine Nonet about nature's spider webs - they really are fine spun labyrinths they can stand up to anything Nature throws at them.
In a perfect Nonet, is it supposed to resemble an upside down triangle. Someone here told me once that the actual visual is important too. Your lines are long in places for that.
I like the poem, just wanted to mention that in case there's something in the "rules" that suggest it.
Good luck, Kahlani:-)
Pam
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Oh, thank you, Pam. I'm new to this site and trying out different poem styles. Any feedback is welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Did you know that spiders sometimes weave their webs to show off their designs? Well it is all true, they are natural artists. I enjoyed your nonet, a divine tapestry of words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Did you know that spiders sometimes weave their webs to show off their designs? Well it is all true, they are natural artists. I enjoyed your nonet, a divine tapestry of words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Coming from a master of words, I sincerely thank you, Dolly.