Job's Job
his legacy to us3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what true words complete your well-crafted acrostic here -- faith not gained through friends and acquaintances, but hidden the heart to hold fast always!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! ;)
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Oh, what true words complete your well-crafted acrostic here -- faith not gained through friends and acquaintances, but hidden the heart to hold fast always!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! ;)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Ang Tang
The overall presentation is mediocre. I'm confused about what this is supposed to be about or what the significance of it is. It's not terrible, but there's a lot that doesn't seem to make sense. For instance, are you supposed to use proper grammar when writing an acrostic poem? I would think so, but it doesn't seem to be a priority here. The visuals could definitely use some improvement as well. The graphics and background look very outdated, like something from the early 2000s. That outdated look makes it hard to get invested in the content. Then there's the issue with the man--it's strange. He's pretty creepy looking, and I don't understand how he fits into the overall story or message. Is he supposed to be unsettling? Because if that's the goal, it's working, but I'm not sure that's what was intended. It leaves me with a lot of questions.
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The overall presentation is mediocre. I'm confused about what this is supposed to be about or what the significance of it is. It's not terrible, but there's a lot that doesn't seem to make sense. For instance, are you supposed to use proper grammar when writing an acrostic poem? I would think so, but it doesn't seem to be a priority here. The visuals could definitely use some improvement as well. The graphics and background look very outdated, like something from the early 2000s. That outdated look makes it hard to get invested in the content. Then there's the issue with the man--it's strange. He's pretty creepy looking, and I don't understand how he fits into the overall story or message. Is he supposed to be unsettling? Because if that's the goal, it's working, but I'm not sure that's what was intended. It leaves me with a lot of questions.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a heartfelt poem. I love how you show Job's unwavering faith despite challenges. I felt like this poem was showing us to look past present struggles toward future blessings. This poem radiates hope. Please keep sharing your wonderful insights!
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What a heartfelt poem. I love how you show Job's unwavering faith despite challenges. I felt like this poem was showing us to look past present struggles toward future blessings. This poem radiates hope. Please keep sharing your wonderful insights!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
