Santa's Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Sexy Santa comes early"LDS Santa and other stories
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Well I'm happy I found at least the double entendre on coming early and it's certainly a shock to see your ghoulish AI creation arriving way out of season. You could have held him back to at least Halloween and still got the joke in!
My scanty knowledge of US geography meant I had to google Sarasota to check that it is somewhere near Helene's path.
Clever work with the alliteration by the way and good luck in the contest.
Steve
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Well I'm happy I found at least the double entendre on coming early and it's certainly a shock to see your ghoulish AI creation arriving way out of season. You could have held him back to at least Halloween and still got the joke in!
My scanty knowledge of US geography meant I had to google Sarasota to check that it is somewhere near Helene's path.
Clever work with the alliteration by the way and good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Now it's not even October yet and we have poems making Santa Claus into a evil guy...You better watch it or you'll find yourself on the naughty list with a sack of coal.
Smiles, Carol
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Now it's not even October yet and we have poems making Santa Claus into a evil guy...You better watch it or you'll find yourself on the naughty list with a sack of coal.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
