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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A truly delightful picture accompaning a delightful and clever Senryu.
I love the little one trying to be like grandpa. Very sweet and charming.

Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Mary

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, and those young eyes are always watching and learning. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Grandpa's have such a huge impact on their grandchildren. I enjoyed reding and the presentation is wonderful.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Gypsy,
A sweet poem and picture. I love and appreciate your symbolism.
My dad loved all of his grandkids. Why don't parents treat their grandchildren as strictly as they treated their own kids? lol.
Excellent sentry poem.
Best wishes and have a nice weekend.
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Cindy

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Haha! Wonderful pic and amusing senryu to accompany it. Love the conversational tone of the second line, reflecting these relaxed and relaxing scenes. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Relationship is strengthened through the collaboration of young and old, the gift of sharp physical ability and wisdom gained through experience. Perhaps, this sentiment is expressed by day and night, both which are needed in order for life to continue.
RJ

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 26-Sep-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
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i think grandpa's reading the comics section lol!
love the little kid trying to look like his grandpa

a great haiku with nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This senryu, Hanging Out, has the proper formatting and teams the generation bookends together to examine the latest news from both the political spectrum and the latest comic strips.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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Aww! So cute! And I can imagine how much Atticus loves hanging out with you! That's an adorable picture and I know how little ones love to mimic the grownups they love.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Marival ❤️ 😊