In state of whispers
A scene described in interjections6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Quite the original free verse for the contest here -- your use of but interjections and exclamations to paint an interactive meeting of two people makes the reader smile (and think a bit) -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
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Quite the original free verse for the contest here -- your use of but interjections and exclamations to paint an interactive meeting of two people makes the reader smile (and think a bit) -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This loud, animated post is full of joys, laughter and loud sounds and I was bombarded with happiness as this guy is praising the Heavens and dancing around like Scrooge after he saw the light, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This loud, animated post is full of joys, laughter and loud sounds and I was bombarded with happiness as this guy is praising the Heavens and dancing around like Scrooge after he saw the light, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Samantha Quinn Snow
This is a very fun and bouncy poem that really gets across an audience's excitement. The absence of a spectated subject invites the reader to fill in the blank and makes the scene more generally relatable.
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This is a very fun and bouncy poem that really gets across an audience's excitement. The absence of a spectated subject invites the reader to fill in the blank and makes the scene more generally relatable.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderful poem! I love how you play with sound and rhythm. Your poem really stands out for its uniqueness. For me this feels like a celebration on the page. I can't help but smile at the sheer creativity!
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What a wonderful poem! I love how you play with sound and rhythm. Your poem really stands out for its uniqueness. For me this feels like a celebration on the page. I can't help but smile at the sheer creativity!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was either a brilliant piece interspersed with interjections or a bunch of gibberish masquerading as a clever poem. I can't decide. Either way, it was interesting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was either a brilliant piece interspersed with interjections or a bunch of gibberish masquerading as a clever poem. I can't decide. Either way, it was interesting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Okay; this is HYSTERICAL!!! You have definitely included every one was that ever even thought about, let alone spoken out loud or written!! What a FABULOUS entry - so DIFFERENT AND PERFECT!! - for this contest. It stands out big-time, so I fully expect to see it in the Winner's Circle!! BAM! xoxox
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Okay; this is HYSTERICAL!!! You have definitely included every one was that ever even thought about, let alone spoken out loud or written!! What a FABULOUS entry - so DIFFERENT AND PERFECT!! - for this contest. It stands out big-time, so I fully expect to see it in the Winner's Circle!! BAM! xoxox
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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thank you very much