Closure
Haynaku poem20 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Oh, now that is a terrible way to go. I never understood the people jumping to their death. I imagine, all the things that must go through the mind on the way down, and possibly, clarity, just before the messy end.
Interesting poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Oh, now that is a terrible way to go. I never understood the people jumping to their death. I imagine, all the things that must go through the mind on the way down, and possibly, clarity, just before the messy end.
Interesting poem.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Katiemae1977
Someone once said don't fight for closure. I say it depends as many things in life do.
This is really good. It follows the rules, there's good connection between lines and the subject matter is relevant.
Good job!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Someone once said don't fight for closure. I say it depends as many things in life do.
This is really good. It follows the rules, there's good connection between lines and the subject matter is relevant.
Good job!
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done dark Hanyaku poem. I like the last line as it sums up the dark feeling of this poem. I hope you are okay. This poem is a bit dark and drepressing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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nicely done dark Hanyaku poem. I like the last line as it sums up the dark feeling of this poem. I hope you are okay. This poem is a bit dark and drepressing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from mermaids
You say much in few words. You have written a vivid poem where the reader can see an individual is deciding to jump off a precipice. This is a new poetic form for me and thanks for introducing it.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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You say much in few words. You have written a vivid poem where the reader can see an individual is deciding to jump off a precipice. This is a new poetic form for me and thanks for introducing it.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Your writing meets the style requirement for the poem. You have included strong emotion in the short work. You made the reader experience the feelings and emotions. In poetry, that is a gift. Your writing is well done.
zim
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Your writing meets the style requirement for the poem. You have included strong emotion in the short work. You made the reader experience the feelings and emotions. In poetry, that is a gift. Your writing is well done.
zim
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I have never heard of this. I will try.
Alone
Standing here
Worries surround me
With no release
I jump
Alone Yours is good how did I do? Karen
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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I have never heard of this. I will try.
Alone
Standing here
Worries surround me
With no release
I jump
Alone Yours is good how did I do? Karen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Quite good . Thanks for stopping by.
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thanks right back at you
Comment from jaded831
Creative poem, I think it is about suicide. I looked up the word precipice and reread your poem. It packed power and I enjoyed it, if you can enjoy a poem on suicide. It was well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Creative poem, I think it is about suicide. I looked up the word precipice and reread your poem. It packed power and I enjoyed it, if you can enjoy a poem on suicide. It was well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh yes, the impassive stage by stage description in such succinct wording powerfully conveys the tragedy and poignancy of this suicidal act. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing, Sanku. Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Oh yes, the impassive stage by stage description in such succinct wording powerfully conveys the tragedy and poignancy of this suicidal act. Very impressive. Thanks for sharing, Sanku. Debbie
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from Shanbreen
I guess this is one way of writing about suicide. It is well done via the Philippine Haynaku. The picture is well selected, too. It flows well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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I guess this is one way of writing about suicide. It is well done via the Philippine Haynaku. The picture is well selected, too. It flows well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Yikes! That would not be the answer. It sounds like this poem is advocating suicide. People do get to the end of all that they can handle and assume that ending life is the answer. We need to find our hope in God.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Yikes! That would not be the answer. It sounds like this poem is advocating suicide. People do get to the end of all that they can handle and assume that ending life is the answer. We need to find our hope in God.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Not answer .It is an option There is a shocking statistics . in 2022 daily 22 student suicides happened in India !I dont know who to blame .parents?
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Oh that is so horrible! I wondered what the statistic compares to Japan and Korea and while googling I was shocked at learning about Lesotho - 87 people per 100,000 commit suicide every year. Shocking. I feel so bad for these people who have no hope. 😔