Sabotage
A friendship ended.4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry describing the different phases of betrayal. You did a wonderful describing them. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry describing the different phases of betrayal. You did a wonderful describing them. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow, wow, wow!! You did a FANTASTIC job with this!! It's organized and methodical, yet SOO steeped in feelings of disappointment and pain and, finally, acquiescence. You captured what it feels like to go through a loss of this magnitude. I bet this will do SO well in the Betrayal Poetry Contest! Good luck to you. xoxo
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Wow, wow, wow!! You did a FANTASTIC job with this!! It's organized and methodical, yet SOO steeped in feelings of disappointment and pain and, finally, acquiescence. You captured what it feels like to go through a loss of this magnitude. I bet this will do SO well in the Betrayal Poetry Contest! Good luck to you. xoxo
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
This poem of betrayal was tragic and very upsetting, but that's a good thing! It means you got a strong response from the reader (and you did). I liked how you broke the poem into sections. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This poem of betrayal was tragic and very upsetting, but that's a good thing! It means you got a strong response from the reader (and you did). I liked how you broke the poem into sections. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written material poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest you only difficulty I see with this is that you need to change your text lettering to a lighter color like a white, which would make it show up on the dark background. Patricia.
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This is a beautifully written material poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest you only difficulty I see with this is that you need to change your text lettering to a lighter color like a white, which would make it show up on the dark background. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024