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Tommy the Turtle

Tommy the turtle makes new friends.

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Comment from Begin Again
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This is a good lesson for children, showing them that just because we are different from others doesn't mean we can not be friends. They shared a fun day, and I think the illustrations would be cute.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
    Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I really enjoyed this children's story and your well chosen rhymes, it is a pity this poem is not in metre which would have added the magic to this post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
    Sorry, don't do meter. Can never hear it. Thanks for read and comments.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 21-Sep-2024
    That's a shame x x x