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Desertion

321 verse

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Comment from Sallyo
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I hear you. I love me some dessert and I spend quite a bit of time fixing dessert/desert errors in other manuscripts. It's an interesting homonym to play with:-)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Sally :)
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oh, I am SOOO with you on this one, Mystery Contestant!! Why bother living if you're going to deprive yourself of life's simple pleasures! You don't have to go hog wild - just a bite or two. But don't forgo it altogether!!

Terrific entry! Xo

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Rachelle.
Comment from Amelie Johns
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This is very funny! I think we can all relate to this dilemma. At least I can every day. Great 321 poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Amelie

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Amelie :)