2024 Japanese Poetry
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9 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is sad and beautiful - hauntingly so - and leaves a reader to wonder the nature of the relationship. I love poems and stories like that. They leave the reader to do the work, rather than spoon-feeding him or her. I know I tell you this all the time, but the teacher in me feels that, since I'm thinking it, I should tell you: your artwork is simply exquisite.
Very nicely done in every way, Gypsy. xoxox
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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This is sad and beautiful - hauntingly so - and leaves a reader to wonder the nature of the relationship. I love poems and stories like that. They leave the reader to do the work, rather than spoon-feeding him or her. I know I tell you this all the time, but the teacher in me feels that, since I'm thinking it, I should tell you: your artwork is simply exquisite.
Very nicely done in every way, Gypsy. xoxox
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and while I appreciate the poem, I'm sorry but I'm not looking for anyone at this time. It'll be difficult, but in time you'll find somebody else and your heart will heal--err--let me guess, not about me was it? Never mind!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and while I appreciate the poem, I'm sorry but I'm not looking for anyone at this time. It'll be difficult, but in time you'll find somebody else and your heart will heal--err--let me guess, not about me was it? Never mind!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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LoL
Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The sun is the same sun in all parts of the world, as is the moon. That's comforting. Yes, lovers are often apart, some by choice, some by circumstances. Neither is good. Once again, your poem and presentation touched my heart.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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The sun is the same sun in all parts of the world, as is the moon. That's comforting. Yes, lovers are often apart, some by choice, some by circumstances. Neither is good. Once again, your poem and presentation touched my heart.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
It is a comforting feeling many lovers have when they are apart, that they are both looking at the same sun. It is a very poetic and classical symbolism that is still relished today. Beautiful words tgat are well written and presented.
RJ
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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It is a comforting feeling many lovers have when they are apart, that they are both looking at the same sun. It is a very poetic and classical symbolism that is still relished today. Beautiful words tgat are well written and presented.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
It's sad when two hearts were at one time woven into one and then are torn apart. Even though the two are under the same sun, moon, and stars, the distance of separation is too far to reconnect again.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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It's sad when two hearts were at one time woven into one and then are torn apart. Even though the two are under the same sun, moon, and stars, the distance of separation is too far to reconnect again.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Marival ❤️ 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
This is a nice poem of yearning for another, and it is written very well. I like the passion colors of your words, and the bittersweet message.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
This is a nice poem of yearning for another, and it is written very well. I like the passion colors of your words, and the bittersweet message.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was so nice to read... very sooth and soothing flow...
love the top pic with her wandering the beach alone...
fits the poem perfectly...
good one! thank you for sharing-
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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ooh this was so nice to read... very sooth and soothing flow...
love the top pic with her wandering the beach alone...
fits the poem perfectly...
good one! thank you for sharing-
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like the idea of questioning whether they see the same sun, such is the heartache of their separation. A poignant, atmospheric verse, beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I like the idea of questioning whether they see the same sun, such is the heartache of their separation. A poignant, atmospheric verse, beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
I used to think that at night, if I was looking up at the stars, the person I was away from or missing would be looking at the same stars. It would connect us somehow. Beautiful and tender. Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I used to think that at night, if I was looking up at the stars, the person I was away from or missing would be looking at the same stars. It would connect us somehow. Beautiful and tender. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy 😊