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Comment from BethShelby
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A brilliant moon and stars make for the perfect night for friendship to blossom. Just as these things light up the night, friendship lights up ones life.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Beth.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
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This piece brought to mind the firefly. I could see them being family and friends lighting up the fields and forests at night. This is a beautiful, thought-provoking piece, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Neonewman on 20-Sep-2024
    =)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Last night the moon coming over the horizon was gorgeous. I can believe the moon would light up friendships. Your presentation is beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A lovely tribute to Helen here and the friendship you share, all done so evocatively in your vivid portrayal of a light shining in the darkness. Thank you, Gypsy. Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Brilliant Moon and Stars, has the proper formatting and brings the illumination into the lonely scene to allow that we are accompanied through the night with friends.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
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As the moon reflects light, we can also reflect the light of life, I'm sure that we are certainly a reflection of our ancestors, projecting their light as well, well done Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Marival,
This is a good poem that shows nature and friendship are both beautiful and can light up your life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Joan.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by dragonpoet on 21-Sep-2024
    No problem, Marival.
    Joan
Comment from Begin Again
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Thank yu for sharing this touching haiku. The setting of the calming evening sky is perfect for what matters most - friendship to bless our hearts and bring joy into our lives with its light.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Carol

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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So true! Friendships do light up life and we need these lights as the world can be a very dark place sometimes. I liked the consonance of "L" words in your poem and the lovely pictures! Thankful for your friendship!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Marival. ❤️ 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww sweet... you must be close.
a great haiku - you should print it and put a couple pics of the two of you around it and give it to her as a gift!
cool pic, too - love the little gold stars
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊