Summer's Song
So many ways summer sing!6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love your use of personification!! Not only does it evoke personal memories but it helps emotion paint your lovely words here!! Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! :-)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Love your use of personification!! Not only does it evoke personal memories but it helps emotion paint your lovely words here!! Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! :-)
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you for a wonderful review!
Comment from Begin Again
Yes, the songs of summer can be sung in so many ways... beautiful moments of nature that we often take for granted. Too bad that soon Autumn will march in and chase summer away.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Yes, the songs of summer can be sung in so many ways... beautiful moments of nature that we often take for granted. Too bad that soon Autumn will march in and chase summer away.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your excellent review ... but watch out for Autumn's song that God will send!
Comment from gangreen
This is a very musical and busy poem,from the wrens singing to the bees humming and the burbling creek and the chants of the children.The weather itself provides a symphonic backdrop and the atmosphere of a summer storm is effectively conjured up.Good luck with this in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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This is a very musical and busy poem,from the wrens singing to the bees humming and the burbling creek and the chants of the children.The weather itself provides a symphonic backdrop and the atmosphere of a summer storm is effectively conjured up.Good luck with this in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful review. This and the six made my day!
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I really hope you do well in the contest.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Verna,
I love the lyrical sound of your poem. What a beautiful way of paying tribute to a wonderful season, writing an orchestra full of sweet music.
I hope this note finds you well, Verna.
I miss hearing from you.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Verna,
I love the lyrical sound of your poem. What a beautiful way of paying tribute to a wonderful season, writing an orchestra full of sweet music.
I hope this note finds you well, Verna.
I miss hearing from you.
Best wishes for health and happiness,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Cindy, for your wonderful review and your note. It's your turn to write a letter!
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great free verse piece about Summer. You did a wonderful job with all of the personification in this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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I think this was a great free verse piece about Summer. You did a wonderful job with all of the personification in this poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you for this great review. I appreciate it.
Comment from papa55mike
That song is slowly drifting away to be replaced by the fall's explosion of color. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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That song is slowly drifting away to be replaced by the fall's explosion of color. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and your good wishes for the contest.