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Yule Tide

Nature's breath

2 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao!

Your poem reminded me of those blissful walks I took on the beach when visiting my parents living in Tossa De Mar.

The scent of the ocean
The refreshing touch of water on my feet.
The salty taste in the air
The rhythmic sound of the waves.
And the sight of so much beautiful takes our breath away.

It's a treat for heart, body , and soul

Walking on the beach without shoes does wonders for your feet , better than a scrub , it massage your feet and activates the circulation

And even better if one walks in the ebb and flow

Very refresh indeed.

Here at home I enjoy walking barefoot on soft grass.

PS: The title was confusion . Yuletide is an expression used to refer to Christmas time and just Yule the winter solstice.

Is there another meaning ?



 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
    Thanks tempeste. I used Yule Tide just as a reference that brings a light heartedness. Something different.
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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This is a very nicely written and presented pictureless haiku for the contest and I wish you the very best of the contest. May you have a wonderful evening and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
    Much appreciated.