The Owl, a Professor
The owl observes an oblivious dog6 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 2 votes.
Short but hilarious
Yes our best friends do a lot of butt ( and ball) licking but we still love them.
And what about those that eat or roll in crap.
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 2 votes.
Short but hilarious
Yes our best friends do a lot of butt ( and ball) licking but we still love them.
And what about those that eat or roll in crap.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was such a cute poem! I liked the owl's opinion of the dog, and the "censorship" made me chuckle. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was such a cute poem! I liked the owl's opinion of the dog, and the "censorship" made me chuckle. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Has poor Fido no shame to "groom" himself in front of the wise professor? I can imagine the whimsical character fliffing our his feathers and peering down his beak through his spectacles. WEll done!
Smiles, Carol
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Has poor Fido no shame to "groom" himself in front of the wise professor? I can imagine the whimsical character fliffing our his feathers and peering down his beak through his spectacles. WEll done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun write and you made me smile here with this inventive poem for the contest. I wish you luck, this owl is very opinionated and the dog has no decorum! Love Dolly x x x
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This is a fun write and you made me smile here with this inventive poem for the contest. I wish you luck, this owl is very opinionated and the dog has no decorum! Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! love the placement of the surprised (ball) these words can relate to a few people I know sitting in their high towers, very well written and very witty, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Ha! Ha! love the placement of the surprised (ball) these words can relate to a few people I know sitting in their high towers, very well written and very witty, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a charming poem. The image of the owl with "professor spectacles" was perfect. The rhyming is wonderful and natural. It's a wonderful take on the classic "wise old owl" and it made me smile!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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This is such a charming poem. The image of the owl with "professor spectacles" was perfect. The rhyming is wonderful and natural. It's a wonderful take on the classic "wise old owl" and it made me smile!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you Michael. I'm glad it made you smile. I was smiling as I wrote it.