2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
A wonderful poem to welcome Autumn. I'm writing this on my porch feeling the brisk night air as I read this and am cheered up by the upcoming season.
You capture the essence of Autumn so well!
Best wishes,
Blessings,
Cindy
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Gypsy,
A wonderful poem to welcome Autumn. I'm writing this on my porch feeling the brisk night air as I read this and am cheered up by the upcoming season.
You capture the essence of Autumn so well!
Best wishes,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and isn't it scary and a bit depressing thar fall is here already? Time goes too damn fast, it makes my head spin, I adjust to the season, and it's on to the next
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and isn't it scary and a bit depressing thar fall is here already? Time goes too damn fast, it makes my head spin, I adjust to the season, and it's on to the next
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I remember growing up in the Midwest. I could actually smell autumn in the air. I miss that. Thank you for the beautiful presentation and poem. I enjoyed both.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I remember growing up in the Midwest. I could actually smell autumn in the air. I miss that. Thank you for the beautiful presentation and poem. I enjoyed both.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
love the rustle and whoosh onomatopoeia - nice imagistic words for the hearing sense
great imagery and smooth flow blowing throughout the lines
the top pic is very cool, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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love the rustle and whoosh onomatopoeia - nice imagistic words for the hearing sense
great imagery and smooth flow blowing throughout the lines
the top pic is very cool, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
I like how you used the phrase "winds of change" here.
This is a very effective gogyohka poem. It's smooth and has good interconnection between lines.
Thoroughly enjoyed Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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I like how you used the phrase "winds of change" here.
This is a very effective gogyohka poem. It's smooth and has good interconnection between lines.
Thoroughly enjoyed Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, katiemae
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Hahaha. I love that song you mentioned in the author notes. Winds of change. This was a stunning poem that brought autumn to life for me. The drama of the season that floats in on a gentle breeze only to change the vibrant greens to gold. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Hahaha. I love that song you mentioned in the author notes. Winds of change. This was a stunning poem that brought autumn to life for me. The drama of the season that floats in on a gentle breeze only to change the vibrant greens to gold. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, I'm not ready for fall's coming and those whispering winds that build too loudly for my liking! But I admire your poetic interpretation here and, in particular, the evocative "wind of change." Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Yes, I'm not ready for fall's coming and those whispering winds that build too loudly for my liking! But I admire your poetic interpretation here and, in particular, the evocative "wind of change." Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This is so lovely as every awesome and enlightening word is true. But my favorite is the whispering between... and the wind of change..Very clever.
I have joined you here and there as I do love your clubs and also I want you to know that I included you in my thank you to my friends because I still consider you a very good one. For me that will never change. Take care! I miss you.
Beautiful post, but they all are.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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This is so lovely as every awesome and enlightening word is true. But my favorite is the whispering between... and the wind of change..Very clever.
I have joined you here and there as I do love your clubs and also I want you to know that I included you in my thank you to my friends because I still consider you a very good one. For me that will never change. Take care! I miss you.
Beautiful post, but they all are.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Ooh! I like the "wind of change" and you used so many onomatopoeic words in this poem like "whispering" and "rustle" and "whoosh"! You could have even used one of your favorite words - susurrates instead of whispering but both works well for the personification of Fall.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Ooh! I like the "wind of change" and you used so many onomatopoeic words in this poem like "whispering" and "rustle" and "whoosh"! You could have even used one of your favorite words - susurrates instead of whispering but both works well for the personification of Fall.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you! I appreciate your exceptional six stars review, big sister. I'm happy you like it. I like to use onomatopoeic words.
I love the phrase.... "the wind of change:
Love ❤️
Marival 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Change is inevitable, it is something that we all must adapt to. Your point of this fact is very well made through the use of metaphorical phrases.
Thank you for sharing
RJ
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Change is inevitable, it is something that we all must adapt to. Your point of this fact is very well made through the use of metaphorical phrases.
Thank you for sharing
RJ
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
