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A Writing Site Contest?

5-7-5 contest entry

6 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Well, if you're right, then you're guaranteed a win here! We redheads do that all the time for people. I know for sure I'LL be voting for my fellow ginger! Well, er, um, I mean I'll be voting for this brilliant sonnet ABOUT this little carrot top...or, wait - is it a flash fiction? A nonette? It's something terrific; I'm just sure of it!! Xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
    Nope, just came in second. Lol. Hey Rach, hi. Yeah, it just bugs me when someone wins because they have a pretty picture but the words wouldn't even make sense without it. So I just love complaining about it. Haha. I hope all is well on your end.

    ;)

    Ron
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and the picture is so cute! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Teri. When I came across this picture I just had to use it. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Agreed. However I would expect this statement to appear in the FS forum rather than a poetry contest. So many times I've seen a poem that would clearly be meaningless without its picture.
Well done and best wishes
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review, Katiemae. Yes, that has happened way too many times to count. Bringing it up on the forum does nothing so I just like ti gripe about it in contests. Lol.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Great point!
But if I vote for this one, am I voting for your poem, for the message, or for the cute picture? I don't even know.
Good luck in the contest.
(smiley face here)

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
    Lol. Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Wayne. I'm pretty sure you'd be voting for the meaning and just get the little added bonus with the picture. Haha. I really appreciate it, friend. Have yourself a great day, Wayne.
Comment from kahpot
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Excellent, yes, the picture does tell the story, gorgeous photo and as the expression says it all, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review, kahpot. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from jessizero
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I think you have a point, and that is a great picture. It seems like you got the syllable counts right, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi.