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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from lyenochka
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Sunsets feel different at every season. I'm sure the dolphins had fun splashing in the sunset colored water. Great use of the s-sound alliteration in your poem!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Big Sister.

    MariVal 😘 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm wondering why the waves are moody. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoy the times I've gone to the Gulf and was able to see dolphins. They're so much fun to watch.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you very, Barbara

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
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Really like this one. "Moody blue waves " is particularly nice. "Cerulean sea" ...also very nice. Liked that you mentioned dolphins.
Well done Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
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You know, I've never thought of waves being moody before. It makes sense. Sometimes, they're calm and gentle; sometimes, they're wild and angry, and everything in between. Beautifully crafted, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Steve. God bless you too.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Neonewman on 14-Sep-2024
    Always a pleasure.
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the "moody blue waves" image!
it creates a cool picture...
a great haiku with smooth flowing words...

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Love all the blues here! Cerulean is such a beautiful word infusing your naani verse with atmosphere and a seductive image of sunset over the sea. Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very nicely written and it is beautifully presented, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you a very blessed evening and a very, very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
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It's always fascinated me the way the sea and the horizon blend into one when there is a calm day, it looks like eternity as time blends with eternity to make one miracle, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by royowen on 14-Sep-2024
    Most welcome