2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 87 "Your Side of the Bed".
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Nightingales wouldn't be very cuddly. That I'm sure of. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation and poem with us. This poem causes the reader to wonder if that side of the is empty and cold other nights or only tonight. LOL Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Nightingales wouldn't be very cuddly. That I'm sure of. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation and poem with us. This poem causes the reader to wonder if that side of the is empty and cold other nights or only tonight. LOL Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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LoL. Sometimes it's good to have the bed to yourself ... hehe
Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
a sad poem. . . yet with a distinct air of hope floating within. . .
this is a great naani poem (if you want to name it) -
cool pics and the light blue colour is perfect for the font. . .
great imagery and smooth flow -
thank you for sharing!
shelley :-)
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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a sad poem. . . yet with a distinct air of hope floating within. . .
this is a great naani poem (if you want to name it) -
cool pics and the light blue colour is perfect for the font. . .
great imagery and smooth flow -
thank you for sharing!
shelley :-)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love your rather surreal imagination, Gypsy! This tells us so much so succinctly about loss but also about our connection and rapport with nature. Are we ever truly alone? Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I love your rather surreal imagination, Gypsy! This tells us so much so succinctly about loss but also about our connection and rapport with nature. Are we ever truly alone? Take care Debbie
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I think God is by our side and the people who have passed souls.
There have been dark times in my life when it was just me and God. I survived dangerous situations and I wondered why until it was up to me to care for my grandson since he was a baby. Now I have purpose.
Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interestingly enough, the nightingale is given to being the bird that sings songs of love. It is quite fitting that it be her night's companion. Beautiful and alluring poem, that is well written.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Interestingly enough, the nightingale is given to being the bird that sings songs of love. It is quite fitting that it be her night's companion. Beautiful and alluring poem, that is well written.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from GWHARGIS
Through this simple poem (and I mean no disrespect) you have captured the emptiness of the night. Used to having their lover beside them, the bed is cold and the emptiness and loneliness is palpable. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Through this simple poem (and I mean no disrespect) you have captured the emptiness of the night. Used to having their lover beside them, the bed is cold and the emptiness and loneliness is palpable. Gretchen
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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"emptiness of the night" so well put. You would make a great haiku poet. Haiku is supposed to be simple but deep.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That's so sad. I think when we lose a loved one whether to death or divorce, it's that empty side of the bed that is most noticed. On the other hand, the beloved can make us cold by stealing all the blankets!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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That's so sad. I think when we lose a loved one whether to death or divorce, it's that empty side of the bed that is most noticed. On the other hand, the beloved can make us cold by stealing all the blankets!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Yes, you put it so well. Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ 😘 🙏 💙
Marival