I Just Knew It
A particularly nasty situation that quite a few people have5 total reviews
Comment from Marion Issa
Short, simple, gets to the point, nice. Good job conveying a moment in time and emotion in just 5 sentences, and the fact she hangs up is very real I think
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Short, simple, gets to the point, nice. Good job conveying a moment in time and emotion in just 5 sentences, and the fact she hangs up is very real I think
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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And you are compact concise and to the point. There is an underappreciated virtue in that and I for one, appreciate it. Warm regards from Gerard.
Comment from lancellot
An interesting piece. I assume you meant: he slept somewhere else that night.
You form and syllable counts are spot on, and you have a compelling subject. I would only suggest changing this from Adult to General. This is not explicit, and the adult will doom your entry (that is an unofficial rule).
Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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An interesting piece. I assume you meant: he slept somewhere else that night.
You form and syllable counts are spot on, and you have a compelling subject. I would only suggest changing this from Adult to General. This is not explicit, and the adult will doom your entry (that is an unofficial rule).
Good luck.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I thank you for informing me of such and I do appreciate hearing from you. You are blunt and concise, and I admire that. Regards from GK
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I'm not quite sure that your post needed this level of gate-keeping so I hope it's not deterring too many would-be reviewers. Your 5 line verse dramatically captures the frustration of trying to defend oneself from groundless allegations and still not being believed. Or maybe protesting too loudly and being caught out! Good luck, Gerard! Debbie
I suppose that he slept some(where) else that night.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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I'm not quite sure that your post needed this level of gate-keeping so I hope it's not deterring too many would-be reviewers. Your 5 line verse dramatically captures the frustration of trying to defend oneself from groundless allegations and still not being believed. Or maybe protesting too loudly and being caught out! Good luck, Gerard! Debbie
I suppose that he slept some(where) else that night.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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You were right in that assertion, but I thought it better to err on the side of caution. I found out afterwards but live and learn, Good to hear from you and warm regards from Gerard.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, this is an awkward situation as this guy is cheating and the evidence is clear here. An inventive post Gerard, I hope you are not speaking from experience, ha ha ha, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Oh dear, this is an awkward situation as this guy is cheating and the evidence is clear here. An inventive post Gerard, I hope you are not speaking from experience, ha ha ha, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Dolly, it is seldom not awkward. Thanks for the review. I am pleased at the response that I have received from this one. Best wishes always, Gerard Keogh
Comment from Begin Again
Within every lie...the truth lingers and begs to come out. Why is it that they can not see their wrong or place the blame on someone else? Your words say it all!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Within every lie...the truth lingers and begs to come out. Why is it that they can not see their wrong or place the blame on someone else? Your words say it all!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much. I regret the x rating but the bitch word set me thinking. In any case, I thank you for your review and best wishes always from Gerard.