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Viewing comments for Chapter 85 "Summoning Passion".
7 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
it may be dramatic, but it's a good imagistic drama!
well-written with smooth flow - and cool pics!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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it may be dramatic, but it's a good imagistic drama!
well-written with smooth flow - and cool pics!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
So much of this pain of the past is linked to nature and the weather. You've chosen some wild imagery to express the passion interspersed with a transitional moment of calm reflection. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy.Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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So much of this pain of the past is linked to nature and the weather. You've chosen some wild imagery to express the passion interspersed with a transitional moment of calm reflection. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy.Take care Debbie
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Love is a very complicated emotion. This poem seems to be speaking about love that was associated grief and regret. Perhaps over once which might have been pure, but turned toxic.
Was it then truly love.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Love is a very complicated emotion. This poem seems to be speaking about love that was associated grief and regret. Perhaps over once which might have been pure, but turned toxic.
Was it then truly love.
RJ
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Your welcome
RJ
Comment from royowen
Yep, unless differences are resolved and reconciliation comes to pass, one might as well move on from any relationship, this is beautifully written aa always Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Yep, unless differences are resolved and reconciliation comes to pass, one might as well move on from any relationship, this is beautifully written aa always Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I believe we are all masters of our own emotions. Yes, they can often send us into our deepest pits, but I believe with God's help we can be lifted out. If we allow Him to do that. I know with the death my infant son; I was angry with God. I blamed Him for allowing Michael to die. He remained faithful and waited until I was ready. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I believe we are all masters of our own emotions. Yes, they can often send us into our deepest pits, but I believe with God's help we can be lifted out. If we allow Him to do that. I know with the death my infant son; I was angry with God. I blamed Him for allowing Michael to die. He remained faithful and waited until I was ready. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Of course, I agree. This is just a poem... a bit dramatic lol it's the Spanish poet in me.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures a past love. The way you use weather to share your feelings is moving. The final lines, with their "aching lightning" and "dark clouds" are perfect examples. What wonderful word choices. You can feel the emotion in your poem. So well done! And I love the presentation too!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures a past love. The way you use weather to share your feelings is moving. The final lines, with their "aching lightning" and "dark clouds" are perfect examples. What wonderful word choices. You can feel the emotion in your poem. So well done! And I love the presentation too!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
That's so hard with the past that still clings and brings up "painful memories". Even though the love was "toxic", it shows that it was strong and still something remembered, not easily forgotten.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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That's so hard with the past that still clings and brings up "painful memories". Even though the love was "toxic", it shows that it was strong and still something remembered, not easily forgotten.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This was a bit melodramatic lol it's the Spanish poet in me. But my ex husband has been on my mind, no emotions... just on my mind. I wonder how he's doing.
❤️ Marival
Thank you very much, big sister.