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Snowfall's Blushes

Winter's icy surprise

7 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem.
'Snowfall's silent blush'.
Love it, in fact every line is delicious! Lovely words that flow together wonderfully.
Well done and good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Shirley,

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Shirley,

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from karenina
Excellent
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A most beautifully executed haiku, here...

I like the use of blush in line one...

Great alliteration as well, Eugene!

I'm not ready for winter, but reading about snow is refreshing!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Karen,

    Thank you again for another wonderful review. I appreciate and value your comments. You inspire me with your kind words.

    All the best,

    Eugene
reply by karenina on 14-Sep-2024
    I love receiving notification of your posts. I am always blessed to read them!
Comment from Colorado Owl
Excellent
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This is an excellent haiku! Your last line is my favorite. "Beauty's breath in ice" is a perfect description. I can imagine beauty breathing. Thank you.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from AP Apgar
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What an excellent poem and beautiful picture supporting - your poems is well written and has very good, and well thought-out -metaphors - silent blush - frigid air - beauties breath - nice - poem painted a picture with depth giving it a dimensional quality beyond the usual urge to only stay within the syllable count - Good Job AP

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    AP,

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from BlueMarble
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a beautiful way to portray the long cold months of winter that I remember so well from my years of living in the far north climates. Yes snowfall can be a beautiful treat.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
reply by BlueMarble on 14-Sep-2024
    you're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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That's a lovely haiku! I love your word choices. Especially "snowfall's silent blush" - I think you capture the image of snow as it falls. The choice of words is wonderful. You share a visual treat.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Michael,

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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This was a lovely piece of haiku. You did a great job with the personification in this poem, and you got the syllable counts right, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Jessi,

    Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.

    All the best,

    Eugene