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Comment from shelley kaye
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well, now i have green day's blvd of broken dreams playing in my head as i walk alone LOL!

anyway, loved the covered with stardust image - feels very hopeful.
a great contemporary haiku with smooth flow and deep meaning

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Absolutely GORGEOUS, this one, in every way. Thank you, Gypsy, for all the joy and artistry that you bring to me e ery day on this site. You never-but-never disappoint. Xoxo

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by Rachelle Allen on 07-Sep-2024
    Always my pleasure!! xoxox
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Walking alone is sometimes a really good thing. I would rather walk along than be with someone who isn't good or right for me. Once again, your poem and presentation are above the others.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Yes, walking alone is very calming.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from royowen
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Sometimes it's good to walk alone, but then when one believes in an ever loving God, one is never alone, how can you when He promises to never leave one's side, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
reply by royowen on 07-Sep-2024
    Good job
Comment from lyenochka
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I've heard that we share many of the same chemicals that stars have so that Joni Mitchell song "We are stardust, we are golden..." may be more true in some ways.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    How beautiful, I don't know that Jomi Mitchel song phrase. I went to one of her concerts, i didn't like it but she does have good songs.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 07-Sep-2024
    I only liked Joni's older songs. That song I quoted is "Woodstock."