Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Captain Jensen"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
She's like most recruits to a new department and has to prove herself especially because she's a woman. No disrespect meant. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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She's like most recruits to a new department and has to prove herself especially because she's a woman. No disrespect meant. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great. I think you have strong characters. I like the difference between Terry's calm demeanor and Hayes growing panic! It really adds to the tension. The dialogue is sharp. I like Captain Jensen's shrewd handling of the situation. A very interesting and enjoyable read. And so well written.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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This is great. I think you have strong characters. I like the difference between Terry's calm demeanor and Hayes growing panic! It really adds to the tension. The dialogue is sharp. I like Captain Jensen's shrewd handling of the situation. A very interesting and enjoyable read. And so well written.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you again Michael!