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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

So possible is your vagabond stealing the scarecrow's clothing. Consider adding a space before your long dash.

I always amazed at your artwork selections for your posts; this one did not disappoint.

Mark

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Love your humour here, Gypsy, and your beautiful presentation! You get us in the mood (although I'm not quite ready!) for the seasonal change. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Poor cold scarecrow. This was pretty cool. It was a unique premise and I liked the before and after pictures you put with it. I have never thought about someone stealing the clothes from a scarecrow. Lol. Very fun. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Me neither lol I never know what my muse is going to come up with.

    Thank you very much, Gretchen. Happy weekend end.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. The artwork if perfect for this poem. We are so luck that you have chosen FanStory to share your talent.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. Happy weekend end.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Such is the reality of life, the desire to survive is often amplified when desperation is born. What this leads to, is the rolling over of linked consequences. A scarecrow, now stripped of its means to scare, gives way to an invasion of crows, which leads to...well just imagine.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ.
    Happy weekend end.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 06-Sep-2024
    You're welcome. Have a great weekend.
    RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
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well, the homeless person needs the clothes more than the scarecrow anyway lol

a great thought-provoking haiku with deep meaning, good imagery, ans smooth flow - nice work.

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
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Yup, I could see this happening. I mean, did the scarecrow really need them, lol. This is a creative piece and the artwork reminds me of Halloween.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Neonewman on 06-Sep-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's sad, scary, and sort of funny, too. I guess the scarecrow was better dressed than the hobo. But then the hobo might have some good use for the fabric. Well done modern haiku!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    Hehe.... poor scare crow. LoL it's just a poem, no scare crows were damaged.

    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️ 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Oh, geez!! I've seen very well-dressed scarecrows around here - and SNOWMEN, too!! (oh, and DOGS!!!) I can imagine a hobo looking forward to the upgrade!! After all, it's not like the scarecrow's going to complain, right??!! Very cute Modern Haiku! xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
    LoL. You are right.

    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy 😊
reply by Rachelle Allen on 06-Sep-2024
    Always my pleasure. I love reading your work every day. xoxo