Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This chapter really goes into his psyche. You've developed a complex and chilling character. I was captivated by his dual life and the chilling rationalizations he uses to justify his actions. Your depiction of his careful planning and the warped sense of devotion he feels toward his victims is so unsettling and fascinating! Well done! Great chapter!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
Comment from
patcelaw
This is very well written was a pleasure to listen to. You're setting structure your paragraphing in your punctuation. All is very good so it makes it a pleasure when it comes to reading and listening to it. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024