Conversation with Mr. Lincoln
Interesting talk with our 16th President.6 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
HarryT,
Congrats on your win in the A Heavenly Chat Contest. You've written a well crafted conversation with the former 16th President with great skill which is both both profound and insightful as it interweaves the gist of the current political contest into the conversation with great relevancy.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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HarryT,
Congrats on your win in the A Heavenly Chat Contest. You've written a well crafted conversation with the former 16th President with great skill which is both both profound and insightful as it interweaves the gist of the current political contest into the conversation with great relevancy.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Well, thank you, sir, for the encouraging comments. Deeply appreciated.
Comment from M.Ceili
Well done! This is a wonderful conversation with an incredible leader that I too would love to have shared a bit of time with. Maybe one day your soul and his will meet, and have this conversation.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Well done! This is a wonderful conversation with an incredible leader that I too would love to have shared a bit of time with. Maybe one day your soul and his will meet, and have this conversation.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Hope so. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed listening to Lincoln express his views about TODAY, the Republican Party, and the major issues of his time and ours. I also like how he manages to quote his own well-know lines before he leaves. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed listening to Lincoln express his views about TODAY, the Republican Party, and the major issues of his time and ours. I also like how he manages to quote his own well-know lines before he leaves. Rod
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting conversation! I agree that Lincoln would be switching parties about now, if he were alive. Lots of good information that shows a knowledge of history and an understanding of the present times. One slight mix-up on your speakers: 'Yes sir, Mr. Lincoln... You mentioned a book.... (You wrote this as if you started speaking, but it should shift to Lincoln saying the part about the book.) Otherwise, interesting dialogue. Carol
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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An interesting conversation! I agree that Lincoln would be switching parties about now, if he were alive. Lots of good information that shows a knowledge of history and an understanding of the present times. One slight mix-up on your speakers: 'Yes sir, Mr. Lincoln... You mentioned a book.... (You wrote this as if you started speaking, but it should shift to Lincoln saying the part about the book.) Otherwise, interesting dialogue. Carol
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I have corrected the passage. Thanks for your read and response.
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You're welcome. Glad I could help a bit.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful and thought provoking story. The humor and wit in Lincoln's responses were perfect. And I think historically accurate! The way you sh are history with current affairs is impressive! I appreciate the way you captured Lincoln's voice. And the subtle way you navigate modern political issues. This is a fantastic read that both entertains and makes you think!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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What a delightful and thought provoking story. The humor and wit in Lincoln's responses were perfect. And I think historically accurate! The way you sh are history with current affairs is impressive! I appreciate the way you captured Lincoln's voice. And the subtle way you navigate modern political issues. This is a fantastic read that both entertains and makes you think!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback.
Comment from Julie Helms
Ah, this was more the style I was hoping for when I posted the contest. I'll pass on commenting on the content as you and I have gone around on this topic before, but I definitely like your format.
A few suggestions for typos:
but she love to spend money too.
(loved)
In fact, **often** when we appeared together I **often** said, 'Here we are,
(repetitive, would remove or reword one)
Though not as ugly as slavery, it has an unglyness of its own.
(Ugliness)
white dove flew in an open window and drop a note on Abe's lap.
(dropped)
Best of luck!
Julie
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Ah, this was more the style I was hoping for when I posted the contest. I'll pass on commenting on the content as you and I have gone around on this topic before, but I definitely like your format.
A few suggestions for typos:
but she love to spend money too.
(loved)
In fact, **often** when we appeared together I **often** said, 'Here we are,
(repetitive, would remove or reword one)
Though not as ugly as slavery, it has an unglyness of its own.
(Ugliness)
white dove flew in an open window and drop a note on Abe's lap.
(dropped)
Best of luck!
Julie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the catches. Appreciated the feedback.
