Fun With Friends
Summer Fun After School2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great poem for a child. I liked the way time passed so quickly in this poem. You did a great job with your rhymes, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I think this was a great poem for a child. I liked the way time passed so quickly in this poem. You did a great job with your rhymes, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was great! You share summers as a child and the excitement of spending time with friends so well. I love how you've share school and play. And you highlighting the anticipation of summer fun and the simple pleasures of riding bikes and hanging out at the park. A heartwarming read!
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This was great! You share summers as a child and the excitement of spending time with friends so well. I love how you've share school and play. And you highlighting the anticipation of summer fun and the simple pleasures of riding bikes and hanging out at the park. A heartwarming read!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024