2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 67 "The Wild Horse"*
7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling taming the wild horse is a metaphor for taming a man. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and the entire presentation. I enjoyed both very much. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I have a feeling taming the wild horse is a metaphor for taming a man. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and the entire presentation. I enjoyed both very much. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like your using of metaphor for the wild sex act. Maybe I read too much into it. YOu are very skillful at writing these poems. I always learnt a lot from you.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I like your using of metaphor for the wild sex act. Maybe I read too much into it. YOu are very skillful at writing these poems. I always learnt a lot from you.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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You are right. I left it up for interpretation.
Thank you very much, Lisa
Gypsy😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Perhaps, her own life is reflected in the wild steed and the imagery which this portrays, as she tames the uninhabited "beast." This is a very compelling and graphic piece that is well illustrated and complicated by strong imagery.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Perhaps, her own life is reflected in the wild steed and the imagery which this portrays, as she tames the uninhabited "beast." This is a very compelling and graphic piece that is well illustrated and complicated by strong imagery.
RJ
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy😊
Comment from shelley kaye
love that last line
holding tight to the rein of life
while trying to tame it...
cool imagery with a hopeful feeling
smooth flow throughout...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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love that last line
holding tight to the rein of life
while trying to tame it...
cool imagery with a hopeful feeling
smooth flow throughout...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy😊
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting story in your tanka. I feel like there are more overtones intended than the taming of a horse. Perhaps it also talks of the taming of a man in her life.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Interesting story in your tanka. I feel like there are more overtones intended than the taming of a horse. Perhaps it also talks of the taming of a man in her life.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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yes, you are right I left it up for interpretation but so far everyone got the innuendo. lol
Thank you very much, Big Sister
MariVal😊😘
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely worried and is beautifully presented. I wish you the very best when I first saw the picture of it. I thought of the story that I read as a child called black beauty. That was the story of a very lovely horse. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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This is very nicely worried and is beautifully presented. I wish you the very best when I first saw the picture of it. I thought of the story that I read as a child called black beauty. That was the story of a very lovely horse. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia
Gypsy😊
Comment from Jacob1395
I could really picture this scene in my mind of the person trying to tame a horse, I loved the line "by the shore at eventide," and then how you ended it as well with, "she held tight to the reign of her life." It felt, to me, as I was reading, that this character is really, at this moment, struggling to hold onto her life, and that they are just holding on. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I could really picture this scene in my mind of the person trying to tame a horse, I loved the line "by the shore at eventide," and then how you ended it as well with, "she held tight to the reign of her life." It felt, to me, as I was reading, that this character is really, at this moment, struggling to hold onto her life, and that they are just holding on. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Jacob
Gypsy😊