A Bible
Bible Acrostic3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this. It's beautifully illustrated and presented and the Bible acrostic is composed simply, fluently and memorably. My only query is why the first line is in tiny font when it needs to be more emphatic as an opening line? But excellently done and a strong contender in my view. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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I like this. It's beautifully illustrated and presented and the Bible acrostic is composed simply, fluently and memorably. My only query is why the first line is in tiny font when it needs to be more emphatic as an opening line? But excellently done and a strong contender in my view. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Superb review. Got my fonts in a mix! Zanya
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Love acrostics that flow with the poem and if weren't formatted as an acrostic, not many would notice. That's a sign of a good acrostic to me. Great job! It really resonated with me. I love how you've taken something ancient and shown how its wisdom still guides us today. The way you talk about love for both God and even our enemies feels so genuine and meaningful. It's like a gentle nudge to remember what's truly important in life. Each line builds up to that message, and it just hit home for me. Very strong message of faith.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Love acrostics that flow with the poem and if weren't formatted as an acrostic, not many would notice. That's a sign of a good acrostic to me. Great job! It really resonated with me. I love how you've taken something ancient and shown how its wisdom still guides us today. The way you talk about love for both God and even our enemies feels so genuine and meaningful. It's like a gentle nudge to remember what's truly important in life. Each line builds up to that message, and it just hit home for me. Very strong message of faith.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done. I like your word choice of "blueprint". For me that says that you can follow what's in these these pages for a better life. You offer timeless wisdom on leading a life.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Nicely done. I like your word choice of "blueprint". For me that says that you can follow what's in these these pages for a better life. You offer timeless wisdom on leading a life.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2024
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Great review & comments. Zanya